M/C has finally beat the game. Now they can choose whoever they want to be with forever.... but is the decision as easy as it seems?
This story is built off a prompt book titled "complete the story".
When 7 people wake up in a world that has no logic or reason, they must find a way to survive and defeat the Ender Dragon in this game. But, the only problem with playing this devious game of Minecraft, is that if you die in the game- you die in reality. While they have no memory of how they all ended up in this shenanigan, the stories of their previous lives shine through and even open some of the doors that blocked them before. Adventure! No logic! Puns! Welcome to the cubed world of Minecraft Hardcore.
(Currently in the process of being revised and rewritten. Right now, up to Chapter 8 [Rough Patches] has been rewritten. If the quality suddenly drops after that, well, I was a lot younger when I first wrote this. Also, I'm having writers block for MCHC S2, so rewriting this helps a lot.)
Just a small corner where I will post any submitted contest entries I have written in the past for archival purposes.
The Absolute Guide to NOT Talking to Girls!
Back for more, huh? Fine by me. This second book is kinda just a sequel to the first book, which just abruptly ended. I hope you liked the first book, cause this book kinda is just an exact continuation of the first one, so... if you didn't like the first book, first of all why are you here right now, and second of all you're not gonna like this one. Or, maybe, you will like it. Just read the book, maybe you'll... have a change of heart, I dunno.
This is definitely not your basic love story. It doesn't even have an ending sometimes, and when it does, it doesn't end with a 'happily ever after'. Sorry. Another thing is how this is a book about kids and teenagers and their childish romances, so if this story gets cringey and hard to read, it's not my fault. Well, it is, but not all of it is my fault. Kids are stupid.
NOTE: This book won't always have the best grammar. That's on purpose. It's used for comedic effect, and if it isn't funny, then... you'll have to deal with it.
An organization has been carrying out massacres for years now with the intention of taking over the world. They must be stopped.
The resigned best SF agent had to be called upon to do a last mission. He was reluctant but he agreed.
Hello! I first learned about RWBY when a friend told me about and showed me the Red Trailer and it instantly hooked me. I thought it was a video game only to later after 3 more amazing trailers, it was an animated web series.
Volume 1 and 2 are my favorites.
When I heard about the loss of Monty I was saddened and hoped the team would take their time to properly mourn and work with others in the circle that knew where the story was roughly to progress towards in Volume 3 and onward. Now, my only knowledge to things is from a variety of YT creators that cover RWBY and my memory is crap so no idea how much is 100% accurate or how much was just rumored.
Volume 3 I've not been able to watch as a whole completely, just pieces here and there and I haven't been able to this day pin down why. in Episode 1 it was nice but something felt off. Maybe it was the knowledge that Monty had passed during it's development or something else, I'm unsure. But for some reason my writer brain was questioning things that didn't seem to feel right. After that I've seen clips here and there from throughout the volume. The fights left me with much to be desired and I winced at a lot of them due to what looked and felt like a quality/style drop. It wasn't nearly as fluid, especially during the main event fights.
Penny and Nekos were nice and felt natural enough with fluidity. Yang and Mercury felt identical to Volumes 1 and 2 fights. Ruby and Neo/Roman felt identical to Volumes 1 and 2. Qrow and Winter was flashy but didn't feel right and it annoys me because the music is fitting and nice with them keeping to the beat but it just, something's off despite it being fast and I'm not sure what it is exactly that doesn't quite feel or look right with it.
I did miss the subtlety that was Cinder's glowing eyes without the added flame in Volume 1 when we first saw her and again when she'd use her fire. I'm still not a fan of the added flame around the eyes, even in the later volumes, not a fan. Just doesn't look right and is too obvious of "this is not a semblance".
Volume 4 is the same as Volume 3, I've not been able to get through it as a whole just pieces here and there and the fights felt off. Which says something because the fights in the shorts we got felt at least semi closer to Volumes 1 and 2.
Volume 5 I was able to get through a few episodes towards the end and just pieces here and there with the start and middle. Again though, the writer part of my brain was going off and I'm not sure still why Volume's 1 and 2 don't do this but Volume 3 and onward do. But the ending was alright but again, much like the main fights with the event of Volume 3, they should have avoided groups. I'll get into that later.
Volume 6 I was so hopeful and impressed with the 1st half. The train fight could have been fixed up some but it was so much better than the previous volumes since Monty's passing that I was willing to take what I could get. The writing was also closer to being consistent or semi consistent at least for once and I was so excited because it appeared they learned. Sadly my hope and expectations of better quality writing than after Monty's passing were dashed as the volume continued inside the city. I was sadly let down and felt disappointed by the end which I barely finished with the writer part of my brain going off once more in the later half of Volume 6.
Volume 7 and 8 I have not watched directly or clips directly either. I've watched maybe a fight or two from them but that's about it. I tried watching Episode 1 of Volume 7 and couldn't finish it. The writing hadn't gotten better and so watched live reactions to it and from what I heard of the audio, the writing got worse and 8 didn't get much better. There are glimmers though and sparks here and there of something good begging to get out but isn't allowed and it's so infuriating as a writer to see something with so much potential and hope being ruined with badly written characters and the plot bending around to fit the other bad writing.
So, for a year or two now I've been wanting and thinking over how to try and iron out what isn't adding up, also to try and satisfy my writer brain. This is what this will be. I will be sharing here pieces of ideas I've come up with to flesh things out more and smooth out things that either got retconned or don't make much sense or appeared to had come from nowhere. I will also, when the notion hits me as I have other things I do and this is just a side thing for when the energy flow is right, will try to, in order, write out in novel format the chapters of each Volume.
If you're wondering why novel and not script, it's because I'm horrible at the script format. It doesn't feel natural and causes much stress to flow through me. Novel doesn't as I'm more accustomed and familiar with its layout as compared to script. For the very Monty fights, I will do my best to write out their epic awesomeness but I can make no promises to how successful I'll be. So if I fail to match their glory, please forgive this written word format that cannot do the awesome visuals justice.
I will also list out any tweaks I'll be making/using to help things flow smoother. I'm aware team CWBY didn't have this option as hine sight 20/20 but proper planning could have helped them with keeping things consistent as well as having a document with all the things for how stuff works, instead of retconning for the sake of plot in the later volumes.
Thank you again for reading all that and I hope when I do share ideas and whenever I start touching up or trying to smooth out parts of the shows episodes that you'll give it a read and tell me your opinions. Now the ideas I share likely will fall under spoiler since they won't be given in order of the volumes releases. The ideas will be rough and are aimed to be smoothed out when/if executed with writing out the episodes in novel format.
Right when Drako Yau, the chairman and game designer of a game company, is about to release the open beta of the game which he has been developing for years, things go awry. Another company suddenly launches a game which can be played using the brainwave technology, Real World. The map, background, game mechanics, and many more; everything is almost identical to the game he has designed.
Out of curiosity and bitterness, he enters the game, only to find that he cannot log out of it. He has to struggle in what seems to be a game, with his life on the line.
Likes: 1 Bonus chapter for reaching 1000, 3000, 5000 Likes
Original Work: 遊戲之道 by Maple Shing
Schedule: 4 chapters per week
Join our discord server: here!
This story follows a young man named Z and the adventure of his life ever since the untimed death of his grandma. Wanting to grow stronger, two men that saved his life offered him a chance to get stronger, only thing is one a wolf. Follow Z's adventure of finding more about the world he lives in and travels without leaving a stone unturned. What will he find on his way? How will he learn to fight on his own? How will he deal with trauma? Find out in, Detective Z!
For 52 reads on my Emergence Second Chances story. I want you guys to see my face. I am Athen Grooms, Or Death_In_Bloom. I am the writer. I am the creator of these crossovers
story of a new bounty hunter who accepted a dangerous first job, only to figure out the job wasn't what it was cut out to be
This is an update blog I decided to create to keep any of those interested informed of updates either to my story, life, contests I've started, or anything else that I feel is relevant to post about. Any time I feel I have something worth sharing, I will post an update issue here to cover it.