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台灣交流論壇-以文會友 豐富你我
台灣交流論壇-以文會友 豐富你我
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需要有人看一下我的作品QAQ
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南風吹颯
南風吹颯 ⋅ 6 years ago
人家的作品產量固定，但就是不大明白程度在哪裡？
人家好煩惱程度只有幼幼班的等級(T_T)
有人幫幫忙嗎？( 9 3 9)
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InDeeeer
InDeeeer ⋅ 6 years ago
隨便掃了一下最多人點的最新一篇。可以試著多鋪一點敘述，把情景結合成連貫的東西。
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南風吹颯
南風吹颯 ⋅ 6 years ago
@InDeeeer,好滴！試著做做看！謝謝大大！
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