@roseofnoonvale,

You'd like to know more about second person narrative? (Continuing in all seriousness) That would be a good way discuss tenses as well as narritive pov's. The comma one would be a great puntuation series; colons, semi-colons, dashes, hyphens, periods, and all that jazz: definitely good starting places.
Thanks for the feedback!

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Pencil Melody, Principal

@Pencil Melody,  your welcome. And may be a good idea to do lessons on commonly misused words like to/too/two, your/you're, its/it's and such. A lot of people make mistakes with those

@XXjoeyXX,

That'll defintely be a good subject to start with then.
I'm not necessarily sure which word you're talking about. It's not 'accent' is it?

Thanks!

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Pencil Melody, principal

@Pencil Melody, I think he means colloquial language, or language of a region. Which accents would affect that

@roseofnoonvale, yes that! I have no idea exactly what colloquial language is...OK I sorta do but...

@roseofnoonvale,
That's what I figured he meant. For instance, when you're trying to write a character with a southern accent, all those "howdy folks" and "bless your hearts." Thank you for clarifying!

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Pencil Melody, principal

@Stormie Dawn,

Thanks for the suggestion. I was considering this subject, and will continue to work on it. I feel so bad; I really haven't done a lot for this group.

Pencil Melody, Principal

@Pencil Melody, Naw, it's okay. Oh is it love the concept of the whole thing, helping the writers. Most groups are about random thing, but this one actually is making us better as writers. Good job!

Well, there are a lot of stories that need grading.  If you need the grading sheet it can be found in the related thread about grading. Now if you're not sure whether someone still wants a grade or not, I would simply reply to them in the thread, starting with the grade request that's oldest in date.

I don't recall if anyone has asked about tutoring yet, but either way, I will work on a method for tutors to use and then present it to the staff to vote on.

Thank you for your willingness to help! ^-^ I greatly appreciate it.

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Pencil Melody, principal

@Pencil Melody, you're welcome :) and I'll read the grading thread and I'll ask on the thread if you want

@Anastasiabelle,

Thank you so very much!

Looking back on my previous comment, I realized that I made a statement that made it seem like you should post the question in the staff discussion thread. I apologize if you took it that way. I meant that you should reply to threads concerning grading help. I hope this clears any confusion if there was any. If not, then go right ahead, while I feel silly to myself.

Thank you! You're very kind! ^-^

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Pencil Melody, principal