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香港小說家聚腳地
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大家好, 小弟第一次寫作,希望大家比啲意見
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掘塵
掘塵 ⋅ 7 years ago
http://www.penana.com/story/13741/%E6%B7%B7%E5%85%83%E6%88%B0%E8%A8%98
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文維
文維 ⋅ 7 years ago
我自己有個小小嘅意見
就係說話嘅引號用 [ " ]有時睇睇下miss左,句說話完左都唔知
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掘塵
掘塵 ⋅ 7 years ago
@文維, 多謝你的意見我會留意thx。
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