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#1
心棠
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7 years ago
我想寫一本在夢裡回到過去的事,醒了又回到現在的小說。
不知道大家懂不懂欸!
就是睡著後,夢到以前發生的事(=做了一個很長的夢),醒了又回到故事的開頭。
簡單來說就是『頭尾呼應』
但不知道要怎樣寫欸!直接跳到夢裡很怪吧!請大家提供意見!謝謝~
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思覺失眠
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7 years ago
@心棠,
或者你可以先寫一寫故事大綱,例如是:A為什麼睡著,睡夢期間回到過去遇見了什麼人,發生了什麼事,因為什麼而夢醒,夢醒之後又發生什麼事......
「頭尾呼應」的話,你可以試下故事開端與結尾中提及相同的東西,比如說:我在教室午睡.......醒來,我發現自己趴在課桌上,教室內只剩下我一人......
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#2
十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
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7 years ago
其實有點不明,只是一個人發夢的開始在起點,醒來也是起點,只是時間背景在過去,對嗎?
一定要先清楚自己故事的時間。
用時間序清楚列明發生的事情及伏筆。
以上都是基本幫助自己的方式,特別是要注意時間的故事。
如果直接入夢很怪,那可以試試先在作品開始定義什麼是夢境,用主角做例子說明一下。
其實任何手法也可以很有趣,只是作者能否表達清楚,令人理解個中情況,繼而投入你的故事。
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#3
心棠
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7 years ago
怎麼說呢?你先去看看我的書吧!因為我也不知道要怎麼說 哈哈
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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
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7 years ago
@心棠,
只見你有一個故事,但還不知道你想如何發展。
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#4
亞格斯
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7 years ago
你好噢,
請問故事是發生於很多個晚上,還是關於一個夢?
如果夢裏的過去,能在醒來後的現實起作用,必定很有趣^^
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#5
心棠
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7 years ago
現實起作用???
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亞格斯
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7 years ago
例如呃……工作時遇上困難,晚上回到過去經歷了一場考驗,學會了新的道理。醒來到現實後,找回了初衷,以出人意表的方式解決問題……之類的。
還是我完全搞錯你的意思?對不起噢!!!> . <
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#6
心棠
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7 years ago
哈哈哈…我要寫的是像愛麗絲夢遊仙境,那種的啦!
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#7
十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
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7 years ago
其實初時還以為是「你的名字」哈哈哈
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#8
心棠
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7 years ago
哈哈哈,是唷~
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