I meant reviewing not criticizing

I'm not a good writer but a human of course

give me your work and let me read



if you can

also, check out my work

I would love for you to review my work! If you don't mind
https://www.penana.com/story/93610/caedis/

Hey there, I have a upcoming chapter of a book I’m writing in the works. I would say what it is, but I’m keeping it secret to my fans; the only people who know are the people who are collaborators or beta-readers. If you’re interested in reading it and giving your feedback, I’ll drop you the link and a description of what is about in a message box. To sum it up in a way to keep it from spoiling the surprise, it is a science fiction genre book based in a dystopian future. It is intended to be a published series.

Hi, I'm always looking for feedbacks. I publish an homemade translation of my work (I'm italian) and I'm always concerned about the quality of it. If you want to check it out, I'd be pleased of it.