Hi, I'm looking for someone to look at my Teen Fiction story called Dark Like Me. For some reason, no one wants to look at it or anything. Recently, I've had a friend of my mom's edit it for me. It's not up but it can be. Let me know. Please. Plus, there was another part I wanted to put in there.

I'll critique yours if you do one of mine as long as they are similar in length. HMU.

I'm not good with critiquing other works. But I can do the best I can.