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Beta-ing - Readers and Authors
Beta-ing - Readers and Authors
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Kwelio Largo
Kwelio Largo8 months ago
Good day to you all.

I have a complete novel posted that requires the full works. It is called GENESIS.
Should you love Science Fiction, Space warfare mixed with Norse Mythology, then i certainly require your help.
GENESIS is complete. A stand alone novel. The 1st of ten in the series.
Note: Unedited
Note: The tab for collaborators is open  
Kwelio Largo
Kwelio Largo8 months ago
@Kwelio Largo, tx for the effort. Im on the road for a month so was more or less in a hurry to get it online. Mistake it seems.
When I get back I will break it up into chapters to facilitate everything.
Tx for the heads up
Aretice N. Treader
Aretice N. Treader8 months ago
@Kwelio Largo,  Oh, I see!
Aretice N. Treader
Aretice N. Treader8 months ago
I don't think I can make the time commitment to read a full novel right now, but I did try to take a quick look. I think your novel looks interesting, but unfortunately I find it almost unreadable because the chapters weren't split into the chapters provided by Penana.

Even if I wanted to read GENESIS, I probably wouldn't be able to finish because I wouldn't have the time to read through the whole thing in one sitting, and the way it has been posted certainly doesn't make it easy to save one's spot. Additionally, the links to the chapters (which I presume were supposed to jump down to the chapter for the reader) don't work because that's not how the pages on Penana work. (At least, not for me.)

In any case, I really do think your novel looks interesting and would be willing to take a look (though I can't promise to really beta it) after it has been reformatted.
Harry
Harry7 months ago
It sounds interesting
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