I don't think I can make the time commitment to read a full novel right now, but I did try to take a quick look. I think your novel looks interesting, but unfortunately I find it almost unreadable because the chapters weren't split into the chapters provided by Penana.
Even if I wanted to read GENESIS, I probably wouldn't be able to finish because I wouldn't have the time to read through the whole thing in one sitting, and the way it has been posted certainly doesn't make it easy to save one's spot. Additionally, the links to the chapters (which I presume were supposed to jump down to the chapter for the reader) don't work because that's not how the pages on Penana work. (At least, not for me.)
In any case, I really do think your novel looks interesting and would be willing to take a look (though I can't promise to really beta it) after it has been reformatted.