Hey, I'm looking for feedback on my novel Ash and Cinder. It's soft science fiction geared towards a slightly older crowd (like, not quite R, but probably more than PG-13). There are currently only two chapters up, but the entire thing is written and I'll be updating regularly.

I'm hoping for a more serious beta reader or critiquer, but really anything would be great. If you just want to swing by a chapter or two and suggest something I could work on in the comments (or point out a typo), I'd appreciate that too.

Also! If you happen to:
- Speak Puerto Rican Spanish
- Speak Russian
- Have experience with PTSD or depression and anxiety/panic disorder.
I would be especially grateful for your expert advice. Since I don't have much experience with any of those topics and I would hate to publish this and have someone tell me afterwards that I royally fucked up.