I would love for you all to check out my newest work, so far with one excerpt of my main novel project. I'm not currently at the stage for hardcore editing feedback with this project, but I would be very interested about what impressions you got for the story overall in this excerpt, what interests you about the concept, and what you liked and/or didn't like in this excerpt. :)
https://www.penana.com/story/68397/sin-game/issue/0
If you have any stories you want to share and want others to read, post them here.
I’m also an editor. So if you need someone to edit your work, or just read over it to check, I can do that.