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戰鬥的氣氛、情緒
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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
十三郎(多媒體廢作人) ⋅ 7 years ago
早前收到別人對自己作品的評語。

有些點子單看是明白，但要做到這個效果有點困難。

應該如何從文字中顯示出戰鬥的鋪陳及情緒？
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墨
墨 ⋅ 7 years ago
其實我覺得可以參考其他小說（雖然這方法沒什麼用……），本人都是增加一大堆形容詞來描述戰鬥的華麗，或是用配角來襯托主角~
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9967 ⋅ 7 years ago
患遲來的中二病(?)的我是直接把腦海中的景象投射出來lol
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不邪
不邪 ⋅ 7 years ago
我覺得寫小說就像是當戰地記者，或者要當自己是戰地記者，腦海中想像畫面，身心代入畫面，然後用文字描述畫面中的人事和物！
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