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求救!求救!關於劇情問題
#1
墨
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7 years ago
請問劇情跳太快的話會讓人看不懂吗
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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
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7 years ago
@辰星雨天,
你可以讀一讀同類型同風格的著名作品,
分析一下著名作品一段故事的字數,帶出了多少層意思、訊息。
之後再從字數、分段或排版比較一下自己的作品是否太快。
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面具
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7 years ago
這就要看你如何寫了。
如果你後面的故事有描述到先前劇情發展的話,應該是不會讓人看不懂。
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墨
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7 years ago
@面具,
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#3
江泱
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7 years ago
既然都說太快了,那應該就太快了吧<br><br> 不好意思,泱沒理解你想問什麼@ @
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鶖翎
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7 years ago
看妳是希望作者看得懂?少數腦補功力強的讀者看得懂?又或者普遍讀者都能看懂?
我不喜歡需要拼命腦補劇情的作品,除非那是實驗作品。
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