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不知道大家覺得我的文如何?
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如夢似幻*(至冬)夢之彼
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6 years ago
如題,其實我比較想知道的是,大家覺得我的文筆如何?因為文好不好就關係到文筆,但是我自己不可能知道自己的文筆如何,我也沒有什麼多重人格,要是有的話我早就不會在這裡寫文了,總之希望大家指點指點我的文筆和文章?目前我認為寫的最好的大概是赤色盜獵團吧?
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#2
語心晴
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6 years ago
←看過《赤色盜獵團》的,《奇幻世界大冒險!》也稍微看了幾篇。
對話很多,是優點也是缺點吧!有時候會不知道哪句話是出自誰(除非對話有提到誰的名字),其他就沒有太大的問題了,希望有幫到你。
反而是《花朵的眼淚》比較好些,只是前面幾篇須注意排版,因為我不太會挑剔劇情,基本上我也不挑劇情(除非真的讓我看不太下去= =),所以就講一些其他的。
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如夢似幻*(至冬)夢之彼
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6 years ago
@語心晴(youxinching), 嗯…因為基本上...我的文筆不是很好,所以比較注重在角色講的話...呃…所以這算是壞也算是好了哦?嗯…好吧~謝謝你的評論,有緣再見吧。
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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
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6 years ago
@小魚SmallFish(喵魚MeowFish),
如語心晴所說,對話多少是有優有劣,如果只是因爲文筆差才決定用對話,這個心態上有點不正確。手法應該是配合故事來使用。
有關文筆好壞,作者本身應該要有這判斷,只要你在完成作品後,冷靜數天,重新再修訂,真正去面對自己,作品自然會好。
可能有點離題,但我個人感覺是著重作者的寫作心態多於作者的文筆。
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如夢似幻*(至冬)夢之彼
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6 years ago
@多媒體廢作人, 嗯…老實說我目前也有在努力,多一些描述之類的...畢竟一開始寫作大家都是新手啊~
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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
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6 years ago
@小魚SmallFish(喵魚MeowFish),
有你願意努力的作者已經很好!
不用刻意貶低自己,
如果是喜歡你的讀者,
他們會覺得自己喜歡的作者也對自己的作品沒有信心,
更不知如何去支持你了。
就算自己的作品差,只要下決心修訂好就可以!
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如夢似幻*(至冬)夢之彼
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6 years ago
@多媒體廢作人, 謝謝你的支持與鼓勵!我會繼續加油的!為了我的興趣!
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#3
奇諾
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6 years ago
還行就是 我這邊正要開始努力
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#4
沒力搧桌
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6 years ago
除了上述有人提到對話佔去主體的點之外,可以再為角色所處的環境、氣氛...等加以描述
試著在生活中或影像裡,把所看到的聽到的,轉化成文字,如教室裡聽著風吹拂過樹葉傳來的沙沙聲、她不安地摳著書桌在上頭留下一道道的溝壑....
看、聽、聞、心裡所想、身體反應(流汗、呼吸)、情緒、將物體擬人化(朝陽元氣滿滿地從山巒間升起)、時間的流動.......很多都可以寫進去
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