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簡潔還是堆疊
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朱諾(Juno)
朱諾(Juno) ⋅ 5 years ago
嗨嗨 我是修了小說創作課的朱諾。

身為西洋咖，我熱愛翻譯小說。而常看歐美的讀者一定不陌生，小說家時常用譬喻，句子堆砌且詞藻華美。（不知道是不是因為metaphor 隱喻/暗喻的緣故）

我的老師則希望我們精簡。不要堆疊（少說廢話），文章偶爾有一兩句漂亮的句子，不要通篇雕琢。少寫心理描述，多些事件推動。（沒錯，我就說被說太疊加、廢話一堆的人）

今天想問問大家喜歡華麗的文風還是簡約，習慣哪一種模式。
＆會不會覺得華美的文章妨礙閱讀？
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ʚ ᴍɪs ɞ
ʚ ᴍɪs ɞ ⋅ 5 years ago
我喜歡適當的堆疊
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穆夙芽
穆夙芽 ⋅ 5 years ago
我喜歡在長篇小說中，情感描述的時候多說一點，比較偏向浪漫主義時期的那種描寫風格，用聲音、味道、觸覺等等去強化小說的整體感受，讓讀者完全浸入小說那樣。不過也看情況，如果是推理性質的小說，可能就不能太多，而是著重在描寫一些之後能夠往回推的點；而冒險性質的小說可能也不會太多，主要應該是看作者自己想呈現的那個面貌。不過適量的堆疊會比完全的簡潔更通用一點。
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