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新人/老人 寫手 自強社群
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新人求互評or單方面評論（言情）
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粉毛
粉毛 ⋅ 2 years ago




喜歡寫作很久了才開書，鑒於我自己是寫作新手，所以上來尋求各方大大對我的建議，點出我的bug 以及不足的地方。


我的寫作方向大概是仙俠+愛情為主要
喜歡這種文的大大有興趣可以來點評我

當然也是很希望有互相督促的作家朋友

謝謝費心看完的你們

https://www.penana.com/story/83753/紫瞳傳
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