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小說求評(求大大們點進來~
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斟墨客 。 迷
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7 years ago
大家晚安,這裡是迷初晨(鞠躬)
加入penana大概一個月惹,是個默默無名的小作者。
最近在寫的小說是《蘭亭》&《月下搗藥》
寫著寫著也不知哪有問題(傳說中的當局者迷???
文筆大概就是那樣,也沒什麼進步,讓我覺得有點小怕怕der~T_T
所以想請大家幫個忙,給我很多很多很多點的建議,狠評更歡迎,此作者非玻璃心,心臟特大。
各位給的建議我也會一一回覆,還請各位大大有空是給小女子一個建議(再次鞠躬)
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梓凌
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7 years ago
@迷初晨⬅,
小女是指女兒,小女子才是自稱哦!
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斟墨客 。 迷
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7 years ago
@梓凌, ⊙_⊙馬上改~
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#2
戀風#
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7 years ago
我覺得你寫的蘭亭很不錯😄😄
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斟墨客 。 迷
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7 years ago
@戀風#, 謝謝妳喜歡wwwwww
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#3
冽晴凜
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7 years ago
文文很棒,作者君加油,其實你應該更有信心的,剛剛看了月下搗藥,我覺得文筆很不錯阿,而且開頭劇情讓人有想要看下去的動力,如果書店有賣我會買
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斟墨客 。 迷
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7 years ago
@冽晴凜, 嗯嗯,謝謝,我會繼續加油的
話說真的不來段狠評?有點期待的說
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冽晴凜
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7 years ago
@迷初晨⬅, 那作者君要加油更丫,之後有地方需要狠評的話再留言給你😄
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倪語
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7 years ago
剛才看了《蘭亭》&《月下搗藥》,都有按喜歡了!文筆很棒,題材及內容都很容易吸引讀者。
若您有空閒時間,能否給我的作品《驀然回首》一點建議?本人無玻璃心。
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斟墨客 。 迷
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7 years ago
@可莉姆, 剛剛看了一下《驀然回首》,覺得喜歡,是我喜歡的風格,而且本人我非常喜歡辛棄疾(我的男神之一)
P.s他的另一闕詞醜奴兒也很棒呦!推薦妳讀一下
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倪語
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7 years ago
@迷初晨⬅, 謝謝妳的喜歡❤
妳寫的作品也很吸引人,個人比較偏愛《蘭亭》,古風大好啊!
我也蠻喜歡辛棄疾,感謝妳的推薦~
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斟墨客 。 迷
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7 years ago
@可莉姆, 古風萬歲~
尋得一知音,抱一個~
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倪語
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7 years ago
@迷初晨⬅, 自古知音難尋,今尋得一知音,當暢飲一番!來,我先敬妳一杯~(被打#
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斟墨客 。 迷
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7 years ago
@可莉姆, 那我回敬大大一杯^_^
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倪語
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7 years ago
@迷初晨⬅, 其實我未滿18歲,不能喝酒ww
沒關係,我們以茶代酒!很高興找到同好。
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斟墨客 。 迷
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7 years ago
@可莉姆, 我也未滿18XD
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#5
月兔縭魑
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7 years ago
有空會過去稍作評論的。
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斟墨客 。 迷
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7 years ago
@月兔縭魑, 那就麻煩大大囉!來段狠評
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