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新手介紹、宣傳、及故事推薦
新手介紹、宣傳、及故事推薦
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請告訴我我的缺點，謝謝！
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季痕
季痕 ⋅ 7 years ago
我是新手，不知道自己寫的是否很好，可否請各位大大幫忙我看看？如果可以，可以給我一點指教嗎？謝謝！
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稽誕
稽誕 ⋅ 7 years ago
https://www.penana.com/story/15094/%E5%AF%AB%E4%BD%9C%E7%94%A8%E5%8F%83%E8%80%83%E8%B3%87%E6%96%99/issue/1

５、６、７、１０、１２、１３
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季痕
季痕 ⋅ 7 years ago
@稽誕, 非常感謝你喔^^
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稽誕
稽誕 ⋅ 7 years ago
@季痕, 神祇入世的故事是不錯，但是可以考慮一個一個加，人設部份深度也不太夠，可以考慮設計一些矛盾的組合，比方說暗黑神想當聖騎士，火神想當海盜，風神很宅
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稽誕
稽誕 ⋅ 7 years ago
@稽誕, 一個個慢慢放，透過日常，才能將角色特性表達出來
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稽誕
稽誕 ⋅ 7 years ago
@稽誕, 最後，一個必要的衝突點，橫貫全篇的深沈主題，是作品的靈魂，比方說，神也無能為力的事
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