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新人 處女小說
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狄耿
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6 years ago
麻煩大家看一下我的小說,雖然只有引子 但是請各位看完之後 給我一些評論或是震撼教育,
我的小說是
(短篇) 血世紀
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InDeeeer
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6 years ago
連載是考驗硬實力的時候
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狄耿
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6 years ago
@InDeeeer, 謝謝(^o^;
我是個功課不好的高中生,寫小說是為了某個人寫的,連載的話....我努力啦
(^^)/
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#2
朱諾(Juno)
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6 years ago
那個 留空格不是正常小說的寫法
應該是要放標點的說,or!
還有 記得句子結束後放句號。
我覺得 有些地方用鋪陳會比較好
想營造情境的話 這是好過對白喔!
以上,就是本人不中用的意見
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狄耿
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6 years ago
@朱諾(Juno), 感謝的意見,我會改進的
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#3
江山美人我都要
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6 years ago
其實文筆挺順的~只是空格可以改成、或是,
描述場景或是心境可以多一點~
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狄耿
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6 years ago
@江山美人我都要, 謝謝提醒
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#4
青山鳥
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6 years ago
內容寫得滿好,但建議可增加描寫,不要只集中在對話上。
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狄耿
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6 years ago
@胡東月, 明白了 謝謝指教ʕ•ٹ•ʔ
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