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大家喜歡都市亂武這題材嗎?(>_<)
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藍渡
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8 years ago
我放不了故事封面,大家可能不會留意到更新,但其實看到只有少數人看過,而且0喜歡0留言,講真差不多無動力寫下去呢,可能你們會覺得我是無理取鬧,但當你係作者時自己的兒子只有被忽略的存在,你也會受打擊呢……(請原諒我1999)
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葉嘉勞
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8 years ago
@藍渡, 我以前一直都無讀者啊。你寫多啲先啦。
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藍渡
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8 years ago
@平凡的葉嘉勞, 正在寫,謝謝
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貓老師
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8 years ago
剛剛又大幅度修改了拙作,早知不要太倉促的發表。
不過,我覺得這樣不斷寫不繼改,其實很有趣,好像在記錄自己想法的樣子。
希望就算沒有讀者,你也能從寫作找到快樂,然後寫更好的作品,也因此有碰到更多知音人。
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#2
律希
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8 years ago
以我個人看法的話,就是故事的世界有一點不明確,還有口語和書面語也有混合,這方面大概可以改善吧(?)
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藍渡
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8 years ago
@律希, 口語其實只會在說話中出現,即係我是故意的,因為我個人認為說話時說書面語有些怪怪的,不過我也已經改回書面語了,謝謝( ´▽` )ノ
可指明故事世界哪裡有不明確嗎?
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律希
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8 years ago
@藍渡, 雖然簡介中有寫打開了平行時空,但兩邊世界和人種也沒有特定的名字(?)
然後也不太清楚到底主角是這邊還是那邊...
或是我的理解力不太好的問題(?)
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藍渡
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8 years ago
@律希, 用得被侵入男主當然是這邊啦XD,但其實之後一些對話有說明兩邊人互相如何稱呼的,如果你想知我先答你,被入侵=要塞人,入侵者=異界人 ( ´▽` )ノ
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#3
貓老師
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8 years ago
加油,讀了一下,在這裡表示支持。
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藍渡
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8 years ago
@貓老師, Thank you( ´▽` )ノ
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貓老師
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8 years ago
@藍渡,
希望無論如何,你都能享受寫作。
我的作品也很孤獨,和我的個性一樣吧。
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藍渡
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8 years ago
@貓老師, 你的作品有一種沒法挽留的傷感呢……
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貓老師
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8 years ago
@藍渡, 可能因為我多愁善感吧。
感謝你閱讀我的作品,說實話,我往往不太想得出甚麼情節⋯⋯
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藍渡
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8 years ago
@貓老師, 如果以同一個地方,寫下不同人的回憶或各自在那地方發生的事情,用這地方連串所有故事作主題的散文集如何?( ´▽` )ノ
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貓老師
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8 years ago
@藍渡, 感覺不容易,但一試無妨。
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藍渡
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8 years ago
@貓老師, 加油!我好期待!( ´▽` )ノ
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#4
薾莠薔葛
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8 years ago
基本上沒看過,原因非關好看不好看,而是有多餘時間就拿來寫小說,我也沒什麼讀者也沒有喜歡什麼的,堅持下去吧,共勉。
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