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希望大家可以給我的小說一點建議!!
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貓繪子
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8 years ago
總覺得在這給你建議絕對會變成劇透
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#5
陳筆
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8 years ago
感覺上是個愛情故事的樣子,有男一男二的感覺。
但是人物角色都非常立體,一邊讀腦袋都會有相對的畫面,這是件很好的事。
如果是國家為主的題材,有機會都會偏向「資源」的搶奪。
也許國王丘是個世外桃源,理想中的話。
但可以考慮一下改變這個想法,如果不是世外桃源而是相反呢?會否是個邪惡大陸之類。
如果正如好像樓上上的說法,想要給讀者驚喜,有時候可能要寫一些正正相反的事情。
純粹意見:)
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