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有誰可以給我建議嗎?我是今天新來的,我寫了一個小說(目前只有兩篇),小說名字是:不曾存在的親情。 希望各位有經驗的前輩們可以給我一些意見,謝謝!
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8 years ago
我是今天新來的,我寫了一個小說(目前只有兩篇),小說名字是:不曾存在過的親情。
請各位有經驗的前輩們,給我一些建議。
萬分感謝!
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8 years ago
如能給予我建議,我將萬分感謝諸位前輩。
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陳筆
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8 years ago
感覺上背景的交代細節可以再寫多點,意思是具體一點,如有不需要的材料就不寫。
例如提及到主角的成績優秀,但其實並沒有和她的家庭狀況有直接關係,讀者就會感覺很奇怪。
所以有時需要更加具體地寫一些事件或者細節,例如可以這樣寫,主角成績雖然很好,但在學校沒有朋友/被人排擠,家人都不知道之類的事,不但會令到讀者覺得成績和家庭連上關係,更加大大加強了主角和家人之間關係疏遠的效果。
有時候寫故事,某些細節都是需要具體地寫出來,這樣就會令到主角的人物性格更加立體,讀者更加會身同感受。
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8 years ago
@Gangsta, 非常感謝您的建議,我會努力加強自己的描寫能力,今後也請多多指教!
最後,再說一次『真的是非常感謝您!』
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陳筆
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8 years ago
@可莉姆, 加油:)
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倪語
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8 years ago
@Gangsta, 謝謝您:)
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