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小說改進方面....
#1
toto
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3 years ago
我是新手作家toto,最近正在嘗試不同類型的創作,但是遇到了一些問題,如標題,我其實很想知道我該改進的地點,但我的觀看人數其實沒有很多,我也不太認識其他作家,所以一直沒辦法聽取別人的意見,希望各位可以給我意見一下...謝謝
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魚落井
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3 years ago
@toto , 你大概有什麼方面的問題呢? 有沒有什麼特別想人評價的地方?
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toto
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3 years ago
@魚落井, 老實說我對人物跟場景的描寫實在是很不熟練
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魚落井
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3 years ago
@toto , 那麼建議可以做針對性練習,例如找一下人物/場景圖片然後寫一段描述性短文。
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toto
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3 years ago
@魚落井, 謝謝你的指導
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指天蕉
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3 years ago
@toto , 我寫場景會先把場景的所有細節都仔細幻想一遍,然後對自己說一遍,再寫下所有的細節 … 可以試試
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toto
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3 years ago
@指天蕉, 我會試試看的...前兩篇我打算先那樣,第三篇就是慢慢來,順便嘗試看看你的方法,謝謝
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#2
愛野美子
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3 years ago
你好,我同樣是菜鳥的愛野美子,路過看看啲~~
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toto
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3 years ago
@爱野美子, 加油
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#3
指天蕉
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3 years ago
你好,我同樣是菜鳥的指天蕉,路過看看…
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toto
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3 years ago
@指天蕉, 一起加油吧
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愛野美子
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3 years ago
@指天蕉, 同样是搞笑派?≧∇≦
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toto
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3 years ago
@爱野美子, 我記得是指天的作者?
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愛野美子
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3 years ago
@toto , 我们互关吧~我也是评书人,我现在眼睛发炎,有空才看看你的作品。不过,所谓当局者迷,你也可以评论我的书^o^
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toto
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3 years ago
@爱野美子, 請多多指教,我已經了解問題所在,正在改進當中
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愛野美子
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3 years ago
@指天蕉, 多多指教,大家互相评论吧~~
我还没有参与过任何讨论区,好孤独~~
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指天蕉
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3 years ago
@爱野美子 @toto 好啊~我也沒有嘗試過評論別人…因為總覺得自己不夠資格…
如果看到我的故事有不合理有不通順有錯字隨便提出 XD
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指天蕉
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3 years ago
@toto , 全對~指天是這個月才開始連載更新的~
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愛野美子
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3 years ago
@指天蕉, 评论不是在伤害人,只是说重点,旁观者清,没有够不够资格啲~~
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#4
愛野美子
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3 years ago
我今天才加入,多多指教≧ω≦
平时在{读创故事}发布,这里我可能会慢慢来,摸熟摸索中~~
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#5
指天蕉
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3 years ago
來互相關注吧!
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愛野美子
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3 years ago
@指天蕉, 好,但是我只是只放一个作品,还有,我是限制级作者,多多指教≧∇≦
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#6
S·Y炎麟
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3 years ago
你的小說點子很好,在對話方面的話有些欠缺,另外如很樓上的人所說,光是看到沒句號,就讓人強迫症發作了。所以必要時刻,還是放上句號,免得人家以為你還有東西要寫,結果卻沒有。🤗加油哦
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toto
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3 years ago
@S·Y炎麟, 謝謝指導,這方面我還在努力,新手作家能得到你們的意見非常感謝
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S·Y炎麟
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3 years ago
@toto , 我也算新手啦,我是去年才重新寫小說的,現在倒是只經營劇本那類的。
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toto
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3 years ago
@S·Y炎麟, 也算前輩啦哈哈
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S·Y炎麟
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3 years ago
@toto , 有問題的話你可以找我,我關注你
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toto
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3 years ago
@S·Y炎麟, 謝謝關注~
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#7
小船兒
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3 years ago
簡介可以寫得再詳細和到位一些,告訴讀者們這部小說大概是講什麼。或者引用書中最吸引眼球的一、兩幕小片段(可以是故事內容或者人物對白……等等)
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toto
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3 years ago
@小船兒, 為了達到讓人感到有興趣點進來觀看嗎?
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小船兒
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3 years ago
@toto , 是的,簡介跟封面都是書的最外表,人喜歡外表吸引的。
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toto
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3 years ago
@小船兒, 好的,我明天再去改,謝謝
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