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有關伏筆~~~
#1
凝雨
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2 years ago
有時候大家會否認為,作品中伏筆太多會令自己很難駕馭劇情,甚至令讀者吃不消,使他們無法在作品中獲得樂趣吧?最近我開始在想,是否應減少一些作品中的伏筆了😅
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知綾_Rin
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2 years ago
@ 凝雨, 我自己埋的伏筆不是臨時想到的,就是連我自己都不知道的,所以我常常混亂😅😅😅
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凝雨
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2 years ago
@希娜, 其實……
我也有很多伏筆是臨時想到的 XDDDDDD
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知綾_Rin
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2 years ago
@ 凝雨, 🤣🤣🤣
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#2
清澄
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2 years ago
我自己也埋了很多伏筆,多到記不住時就會用紙本錄下來,然而忘記填伏筆時就很尷尬了¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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凝雨
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2 years ago
@清澄, 忘記伏筆又被讀者提醒時真的會很尷尬>///<
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清澄
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2 years ago
@ 凝雨, 哈哈,真的😂
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#3
黑正
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2 years ago
最怕就是埋了伏筆,
以爲讀者猜不出,
結果才一下子讀者就看穿了 T_T
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凝雨
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2 years ago
@黑正, 的確,有些讀者真的會一下子猜出來的 QAQ
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黑正
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2 years ago
@ 凝雨, 讀者猜得出,代表他們真的看得很仔細,也是好事吧?😂
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凝雨
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2 years ago
@黑正, 也對🤭
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白爺
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2 years ago
@黑正, 其實這些都還好,更尷尬的是我寫了伏筆,然而沒半個人看出來⋯⋯
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黑正
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2 years ago
@白爺, 好過我,都沒讀者留言,看不看得出都不知道 ~~
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Nox C
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2 years ago
現在的讀者太過聰明,但沒有伏筆的話故事又會顯得無聊,真的很難辦
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黑正
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2 years ago
@Nox C, 壞一點,在伏筆中放誤導性質的假伏筆 ~~
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凝雨
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2 years ago
@黑正, 很壞啊!🤭
不過我想大家也經常做的,對吧?wwwww
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Nox C
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2 years ago
@黑正, 的確,最近經常使用假動作 🤣
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#4
藤
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2 years ago
突然想起可以操作的東西,就是伏筆。
忘了的就算了。
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#5
傀演PuppetActor
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2 years ago
個人覺得不用擔心讀者看不看出伏筆,因為看到多少便是他們自己獨一無二的體驗;反而是作者自己需要小心埋伏筆時的手法/節奏,不要太故弄玄虛得便讀者完全摸不着頭腦,甚至擾亂讀者對於眼前主線的理解
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凝雨
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2 years ago
@傀儡演員, 的確。
太故弄玄虛會令讀者看得很頭痛~
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#6
冠J
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2 years ago
我也有寫w結果現在都忘記是什麼了w
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#7
艾雅
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2 years ago
伏筆太多倒不算什麼問題,收不收得回來才是問題,能圓得回來的伏筆就是好伏筆
被讀者發現倒是還好,重點是後面的發展能不能製造出意料之外情理之中,能做到的話,就算讀者發現那是伏筆也沒差,畢竟猜到是伏筆,和能猜到後面的劇情走向不見得是同一件事情
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凝雨
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2 years ago
@艾雅, 「和能猜到後面的劇情走向不見得是同一件事情」 ,這個我很同意!
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#10
Nox C
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2 years ago
伏筆我也埋了不少,發現埋伏筆不是問題
難題是怎樣合情合理的把伏筆圓滿
交代來龍去脈之後,經常被讀者說「這樣很笨,早就怎樣怎樣就可以啦!」
感覺蠻受打擊的.... T_T
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#11
愛野美子
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2 years ago
我的伏筆就是自己覺得——這裡必須這樣寫,若不是等下邏輯連不上。
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#12
ilwiKAMINA
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2 years ago
要看整體劇情而言,邏輯上是否通順,或者這些伏筆有沒有達成完備性的作用。
如果有,那也不用刻意減少伏筆。
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