終完修正完第一章。改動的地方如下:
角色改名430Please respect copyright.PENANAsIpLZnUw48
除了玄牛之外,所有畜牲集團的戰士都重新命名,因為那些陳生、李生、等等的命名,亂來之餘,又不符合作品性格。所以有以下改動:
何大力->南昌一絕430Please respect copyright.PENANA4w0yk08HFV
劉元山->海柏430Please respect copyright.PENANApZnwzuL8Qq
陳生->曉尚430Please respect copyright.PENANAn0KpIb0Dqe
李生->曉珀430Please respect copyright.PENANAlyJ1jwsHVo
嚴生->迎豐430Please respect copyright.PENANA6g3jn07F4O
史生->富薈430Please respect copyright.PENANA7sFHXn4LOs
林生->傲形430Please respect copyright.PENANA5FSbm0g3Ux
黃生->利奧430Please respect copyright.PENANAxRbIBVwBJK
張生->曉岸
執文法430Please respect copyright.PENANA2adCl8AA8R
也許是小弟進步了,現在回看第一章,文法竟是那麼糟糕,是以也大幅修正。430Please respect copyright.PENANAt4rvOMDW5b