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 “A poor man like you didn’t deserve to be here already poor, ugly, crotchety” sharply Abigail.

“ I was poor and it’s not the affairs of you” reply charles.

It was a time where a poor boy heard about the contest Athletic, who is determined to change himself . The named of poor boy is Charles. Charles and Abigail were athletic in the school. Charles was born from poor family but Abigail was born from rich family. Charles is an orphan who lives alone in a small hut, different with Abigail. Charles and Abigail have a different life.

Saturday afternoon, they are practice athletic especially Marathon.

“Hei, what were you doing? Bring my stuff!!!” Abigail said.

“Sorry, wait for a minute” Charles said

“Oh my god, don’t take to long !!” Abigail scream

Monday morning…………

The sound of a chicken awakened Charles from his sweet dream. Charles quickly to take a bath, after that he opened his wardrobe. Looked worn-out uniform suspended in the wardrobe. He was wearing his uniform. He is wearing torn bag. He was walked on foot went to the school.

In another place Abigail looked bored, He went to school by Car. 

“This is Monday Oh my God I don’t like Monday, why time flies so fast” Abigail said

At the time when on road he saw Charles, he stopped beside Charles. He opened the windshield.

“Hey, you! you !!! stopped!! “Screamed to Charles

Charles don’t hear and keep it running, but Abigail keep shouting calling Charles.

“You called me?” reply Charles

“Yes, you are, you don’t hear what I say, are you deaf?” answered Abigail 

“What do you want Abigail?” asked Charles

“Nope, I just want to say Good Morning orphan have a bad day orphan BYE!!! HAHA” mock Abigail 

“What are you talking about?” said Charles

“You are orphan, pauper, disgusting, look at your appearance, went to school by foot Oh my god you are so disgusting!!! See u at class orphan. HAHAHAH”

Every day Charles is always bothered by Abigail. Insult has become his daily food, all the insult he swallowed by himself. He doesn’t have a place to lean on.

Next Day……………

Charles walked alone. He went to canteen but hiss steps immediately stopped, hear the announcement of an athletic competition.

Announcement for those who take athletic extracurricular, there will be a competition and whoever 1st win tuition fees during school will be free. For more details can saw on the bulletin board.

Charles suddenly turned to go to the bulletin board, and then accidentally, he met Abigail.

“What are you doing orphan?” ask Abigail 

Charles don’t reply, and then Abigail ask again but he screamed.

“I just saw the more details about competition, don’t called me orphan Abigail” reply Charles

“Well, you want to joined the competition?” ask Abigail

“Yes, I want” reply Charles

“Ok, we make agreement, if you win the competition I want to be your friend and no called orphan. But if I am the winner, you must be maid until we graduated and I would called you orphan every day! Do you agree with that?” ask Abigail

“That’s ridiculous, but I would accept your challenged” reply Charles

“Okay see you in competition orphan” teased Abigail

After Charles accepted the challenged, he routine practicing. In Sunday morning he practiced in the field near his house.

Competition day……

Abigail’s and Charles’ sitting on the sidelines waiting the race starts. Besides that, the coach given them spirit. 

“Go Abigail, Abigail, Abigail, go 2x, I know you can be the winner” scream the audience

“Go Charles, Charles, Charles, go 2x, I know you can be the winner” scream the audience

In the athletic field very crowded with an audience, they looked enthusiastic to watch an athletic race.

“Are you ready, orphan? Teased Abigail

“Officially I am ready to be the winner” reply Charles

“Are you kidding me? You must be lost orphan HAHAAHA” sharply Abigail

“Let see later” reply Charles

“Don’t forget our agreement orphan!!” said Abigail

 “I would remember that, calmed” reply Charles

Competition will be start………

“Good Morning ladies and gentlemen…. In this occasion we can watch the marathon competition. You definitely can’t wait, right.” Said MC

“Ofcourse” screamed the audience

“Well well well, there are 12 participants. But I know the audience waiting for saw Charles and Abigail, right??”

“YESSSSSSSSSSS I can’t waitttttt” Screamed the audience

  The audiences were clapping with great fanfare, Abigail, Charles and other Participant towards the start line.

“1, 2, 3, Ready? GO!!!!!” said the MC

Charles was left far from Abigail, but Charles has strong determination. Finally, Charles follow up Abigail. In the last round, Abigail and Charles be the last runner who determined who will be the winner. Actually, before reaching the finish line Abigail fell and It was a good chance for Charles to win the competition. But Charles turned and helped Abigail.

“Abigail, are you okay??” ask Charles

“Uhm I am Okay, why you turned? It was a good chance for you to win the competition huh?” reply Abigail

“I know that a good chance, but My parents said if someone fell and need help, you must  help him” said Charles

“Cha-Cha-Charles I am sorry, I always teased you, disturb and insult you. Thank you for helping me” said Abigail

“Your welcome Abigail, I hope we can be Friend” reply Charles

“Yeah, I hope so, so we can be friend right now???” said Abigail

“Ofcourse my friend” reply Charles with happiness smile.


After that event, They became Friend , become closer and friendlier. They always together wherever they are going.

THE END

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