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Two Homes on the Rainbow
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Hello,

I would love to get feedback on a picture book that I have written called "Two Homes on the Rainbow" 

Harper is sad their parents are getting a divorce, and can see their mom and dad are unhappy too every time they have to go from one house to the other. Although Harper is sad and confused, they are never lonely because they always have their favourite stuffed animal with them, their bird Ray. One night, Harper wishes to the big, bright moon for a rainbow to connect their two houses so that their parents won’t be sad anymore. To Harper’s surprise, Ray transforms into a real bird and Ray and Harper begin building their rainbow. But rainbow building is hard work—will they be able to finish the rainbow before the night is over to help their parents find their way forward?

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