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Gatekeepers [NaNoWriMo 2016]
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  • PG-13: Parents Strongly Cautioned
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Gatekeepers [NaNoWriMo 2016]
Gatekeepers [NaNoWriMo 2016]
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Chapter One
Comments ( 12 )
Flow - I'm interested in the demon child. Is he perhaps what will become of Kyron? I'm probably wrong since I'm just going off the same hair thing.

(Also Flow has some influences on me...)
3 years agoreply

Naerie - Ah yes, that boy is a favourite of mine. But you'll see!
3 years agoreply

Frances - Great first chapter! I really like the details of their family life, it really fleshes out your main character from the get go without having to say a whole lot. His parents are sweet people.
3 years agoreply

Naerie - Thanks! Most of it ended up being spontaneous details, but some things actually are going to turn out to greatly impact the plot.
3 years agoreply

Frances - @CaitlinJHunter, I'm interested to see how his mom's birth and delivery turn out.
3 years agoreply

Naerie - @Frances, Ah, about that. *winces*
3 years agoreply

Frances - @CaitlinJHunter, Aaaaand I was afraid you were going to say that. If you haven't had children and you need some details on childbirth from a first person perspective, don't be afraid to holler at me, I remember giving birth to my daughter veeeery clearly
3 years agoreply

Naerie - @Frances, Oh, I don't think covering the birth is going to be an issue. (*ahem* Chapter 2) But thanks for the offer though. :) I'd imagine childbirth isn't something easy to forget though...

3 years agoreply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - Okay, so, the boy Kyron stood over was the boy from the water? Was he fused with a Griffon, and that's why Jade said he didn't deserve the sword?
3 years agoreply

Naerie - ...I'm confused. Orviss was the big thing attacked the town, the boy is another entity entirely.
3 years agoreply

Lata - This is seriously so good. I like Kyron, he's so adorable.
3 years agoreply

Naerie - Thanks! And yeah Kyron's pretty cute. :3
3 years agoreply