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Gatekeepers [NaNoWriMo 2016]
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Frances - Crap. I knew mom was going to get it. But wait, is homicidal wing boy the kid at the beginning of the story who was talking with the bad guy? I do really like how Orviss seems like a morally gray character though. He's going to be cool to watch!  
2 years agoreply

Naerie - Yeah... I felt really sad having to write this bit. And about the boy, possibly, all will be revealed next chapter!
And ya, I'm trying something new with Orviss, he's fun to write too.
2 years agoreply

Frances - @CaitlinJHunter, Kyron needed a traumatic event to pry him out of his quiet life though, he never would have gone without it. That was a good choice.
2 years agoreply

Naerie - @Frances, Oh yep. Never ever would have he gone without good reason, even if Orviss stole him away. But he has a little bit more of a practical reason for leaving too.
Maybe I should hurry up write the next chapter so that I don't spoil things...
2 years agoreply

Frances - @CaitlinJHunter, haha oooooo spoilersss
2 years agoreply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - Okay, so Jade knew he was a monster? I'm guessing this is the old man that wanted to transfer his soul to a younger body.
2 years agoreply

Naerie - Maybe, but neh, I'm not really thinking too much as I write this, just tryna get that word count!
And yeah. Thats the idea I'm going for.
2 years agoreply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - @CaitlinJHunter, Ha, ha, yeah, go for the count, then!
2 years agoreply

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