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Gatekeepers [NaNoWriMo 2016]
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Gatekeepers [NaNoWriMo 2016]
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Chapter Three
Nov 3, 2016
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Comments ( 12 )

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - Well, Elion must have had a power like Phoenix Down on him, but I'm concerned about Talon...he doesn't seem like his soul's been possessed...how strange, I wonder what the plan is.
2 years agoreply

Naerie - Talon is veeeeeery strange~ He reminds me of some other character I know but with more anger issues. :P
2 years agoreply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - @CaitlinJHunter, Hmm, are you talking about the one married to a tea kettle?
2 years agoreply

Naerie - @Kokiri-Hylian-Hero, No? Not Caelum/Lucas if that's who you're meaning.
2 years agoreply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - @CaitlinJHunter, Hmm, I thought that's who you meant...Jay?
2 years agoreply

Naerie - @Kokiri-Hylian-Hero, I can't tell if you're trying to mess with me or not... I was thinking Elija.
2 years agoreply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - @CaitlinJHunter, Really? He did say, "I don't think we're in...anymore", but I'm not sure I see it...yet.
2 years agoreply

Naerie - @Kokiri-Hylian-Hero, Hmmm true. I suppose I'll get things figured out eventually so things actually make sense.
2 years agoreply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - @CaitlinJHunter, I'm excited, I can tell you must have reasons why you feel a similarity between Talon and Elija, and you just haven't put them to words yet!
2 years agoreply

Frances - Honestly, I know there is a bigger picture here but part of me is with Kyron, I want to punch Elion in the throat. The guy just saw his pregnant mother get impaled by weird wing boy. I'd certainly take a swing at him. 
2 years agoreply

Naerie - Oh yep. Definately on Kyron's bucket list of things to do. I'm looking forward to writing the meltdown~
2 years agoreply

Frances - @CaitlinJHunter, I support him entirely, Elion is a tad self important for my taste. And whether he knew what he was doing or not, I'd rip one of Talon's wings off
2 years agoreply