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Varvana's Gift
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Chapter 2: Liana
Elizabeth L.
May 22, 2017
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Aretice N. Treader - There are some parts where the narration is a bit awkward, but for the most part I really like your prose! Also, I love the conflict in this scene and hope to see how it plays out with Liana and her father later on in the story. I think she and her father are such interesting, dynamic characters.
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