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    玼瑕
    玼瑕
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    寒武紀台灣人
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PG-13
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#1
【站內】妄翔《泅泳者》
3 Likes
693 Reads
0 Comments
#2
【法律】在聊著作權之前
1 Like
687 Reads
0 Comments
#3
【法律】版權是什麼鬼東西?
2 Likes
654 Reads
0 Comments
#4
【言論】谷阿莫事件
1 Like
653 Reads
0 Comments
#5
【法律】二創這時總是被牽拖
1 Like
659 Reads
0 Comments
#6
【言論】陰謀論一下其實抄襲有公會行規吧
1 Like
689 Reads
0 Comments
#7
【言論】據說是2017年最業力引爆的排隊翁李
0 Likes
566 Reads
0 Comments
#8
【站內】《拂曉之子DAWN BORNER》
1 Like
645 Reads
0 Comments
#9
【站內】《狗王》
2 Likes
512 Reads
10 Comments
#10
【站內】《思念未停靠》
0 Likes
551 Reads
0 Comments
#11
【站內】《最後的卡加林THE LAST KAGALLINS》
1 Like
542 Reads
7 Comments
#12
【站內】《記憶宮殿MEMORY PALACE》
2 Likes
562 Reads
6 Comments
#13
【站內】《蛛網》系列
1 Like
523 Reads
0 Comments
#14
【言論】我是新人/生手/第一次/不成熟etc.
1 Like
532 Reads
0 Comments
#15
【言論】為什麼不能檢討受害者?
3 Likes
857 Reads
0 Comments
#16
【站內】《盜賊城之夢》
4 Likes
726 Reads
2 Comments
#17
【站內】《繁景堂的文森》
1 Like
601 Reads
3 Comments
#18
【站內】《燒窰人間-三代香港人的土地回憶》
2 Likes
591 Reads
0 Comments
#19
【言論】去補一下管理大概吧
3 Likes
471 Reads
21 Comments
#20
【言論】拒絕的權力很重要
4 Likes
626 Reads
1 Comment
#21
【站內】《少年a與f》
6 Likes
465 Reads
34 Comments
#22
【言論】灌輸出來的優越感
2 Likes
555 Reads
0 Comments
#23
【動漫】《我的英雄學院》
3 Likes
488 Reads
37 Comments
#24
【動漫】《武士佛朗明哥》
1 Like
856 Reads
0 Comments
#25
【言論】既視感
7 Likes
632 Reads
0 Comments
#26
【言論】從文創到IP
4 Likes
623 Reads
5 Comments
#27
【言論】谷阿莫事件之不那麼相關延伸
3 Likes
563 Reads
0 Comments
#28
【言論】成功很難複製、但災難往往會重演
3 Likes
548 Reads
0 Comments
#29
【言論】空氣產業
1 Like
586 Reads
0 Comments
#30
【言論】公關危機
4 Likes
1797 Reads
2 Comments
#31
【言論】一直走錯路
2 Likes
1213 Reads
1 Comment
#32
【出刊】排版
4 Likes
948 Reads
0 Comments
#33
【言論】小說平台整理
14 Likes
5276 Reads
17 Comments
#34
【言論】小說平台整理(續)
14 Likes
5007 Reads
5 Comments
#35
【法律】為什麼律師要幫壞人辯護
3 Likes
2261 Reads
1 Comment
#36
【言論】《盜》系列文有感而發
6 Likes
1236 Reads
9 Comments
#37
【法律】租書店合法嗎
5 Likes
1094 Reads
0 Comments
#38
【站內】羽希《淡星》
5 Likes
858 Reads
0 Comments
#39
【言論】該低調的事意思就是不要搞高調
2 Likes
679 Reads
2 Comments
#40
【言論】相對穩定獲利的意思就是,確定有營利呀不然叫人幹不確定獲利的生意何不食肉糜?
6 Likes
663 Reads
5 Comments
#41
【生命】4點42分,最後一口氣
3 Likes
584 Reads
6 Comments
#42
【繪圖委託爭議】請香港、海外繪師注意
2 Likes
863 Reads
1 Comment
#43
【日常】拍賣的奇妙冒險
2 Likes
672 Reads
1 Comment
#44
【推坑】《Vivy》從動畫到編劇
2 Likes
283 Reads
3 Comments
#45
【繪圖委託爭議】請香港、海外繪師注意-續集
0 Likes
271 Reads
0 Comments
#46
【生命】十點零三、永遠的小公主
0 Likes
182 Reads
0 Comments

嘛…算是一點個人閱讀後的筆記吧。有時爬了爬文,深深感受到成功雖然很難複製,但雷點倒是很容易複製的。以下雷點有想到隨時在簡介裡追加更新。另外也把一些以前對同人圈或著作權相關的感想慢慢搬過來。

① 在拋出了創世級的世界觀前言鋪陳了諸神黃昏級的歷史之後,開場卻是學院、學院、以及學院,就連穿越異世界也還是學院。大陸級的機密要藏在學院裡、大賢者級的世外高人也躲在學院裡,發動戰爭攻打學院更形同行規,就連大魔王沉睡之地也要學院,廣設學院果然惡政。

② 學院且先放到一邊去,利用課堂講解故事基本世界觀更是常態。這很微妙,感覺就像是高中了地理課還在跟你介紹太陽系九大行星、化學課物質四態、數學課加減乘除。

③ 人物介紹,而且是那種條列式人物介紹,身高體重個性喜歡的顏色食物代表花,甚至還會把能力值數據化陳列…拜託,這種介紹方式貼在交友網站根本當分母遜斃了還不如貼張很正的自拍圖。遊戲清楚條列角色資訊是為了方便玩家有依據進行操作,但小說根本不是在搞操作性是劇情啦劇情。

  然後光是以上三點,大概就可以讓篩掉六七成的網路小說。(慘)

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#1
【站內】妄翔《泅泳者》
3 Likes
693 Reads
0 Comments
#2
【法律】在聊著作權之前
1 Like
687 Reads
0 Comments
#3
【法律】版權是什麼鬼東西?
2 Likes
654 Reads
0 Comments
#4
【言論】谷阿莫事件
1 Like
653 Reads
0 Comments
#5
【法律】二創這時總是被牽拖
1 Like
659 Reads
0 Comments
#6
【言論】陰謀論一下其實抄襲有公會行規吧
1 Like
689 Reads
0 Comments
#7
【言論】據說是2017年最業力引爆的排隊翁李
0 Likes
566 Reads
0 Comments
#8
【站內】《拂曉之子DAWN BORNER》
1 Like
645 Reads
0 Comments
#9
【站內】《狗王》
2 Likes
512 Reads
10 Comments
#10
【站內】《思念未停靠》
0 Likes
551 Reads
0 Comments
#11
【站內】《最後的卡加林THE LAST KAGALLINS》
1 Like
542 Reads
7 Comments
#12
【站內】《記憶宮殿MEMORY PALACE》
2 Likes
562 Reads
6 Comments
#13
【站內】《蛛網》系列
1 Like
523 Reads
0 Comments
#14
【言論】我是新人/生手/第一次/不成熟etc.
1 Like
532 Reads
0 Comments
#15
【言論】為什麼不能檢討受害者?
3 Likes
857 Reads
0 Comments
#16
【站內】《盜賊城之夢》
4 Likes
726 Reads
2 Comments
#17
【站內】《繁景堂的文森》
1 Like
601 Reads
3 Comments
#18
【站內】《燒窰人間-三代香港人的土地回憶》
2 Likes
591 Reads
0 Comments
#19
【言論】去補一下管理大概吧
3 Likes
471 Reads
21 Comments
#20
【言論】拒絕的權力很重要
4 Likes
626 Reads
1 Comment
#21
【站內】《少年a與f》
6 Likes
465 Reads
34 Comments
#22
【言論】灌輸出來的優越感
2 Likes
555 Reads
0 Comments
#23
【動漫】《我的英雄學院》
3 Likes
488 Reads
37 Comments
#24
【動漫】《武士佛朗明哥》
1 Like
856 Reads
0 Comments
#25
【言論】既視感
7 Likes
632 Reads
0 Comments
#26
【言論】從文創到IP
4 Likes
623 Reads
5 Comments
#27
【言論】谷阿莫事件之不那麼相關延伸
3 Likes
563 Reads
0 Comments
#28
【言論】成功很難複製、但災難往往會重演
3 Likes
548 Reads
0 Comments
#29
【言論】空氣產業
1 Like
586 Reads
0 Comments
#30
【言論】公關危機
4 Likes
1797 Reads
2 Comments
#31
【言論】一直走錯路
2 Likes
1213 Reads
1 Comment
#32
【出刊】排版
4 Likes
948 Reads
0 Comments
#33
【言論】小說平台整理
14 Likes
5276 Reads
17 Comments
#34
【言論】小說平台整理(續)
14 Likes
5007 Reads
5 Comments
#35
【法律】為什麼律師要幫壞人辯護
3 Likes
2261 Reads
1 Comment
#36
【言論】《盜》系列文有感而發
6 Likes
1236 Reads
9 Comments
#37
【法律】租書店合法嗎
5 Likes
1094 Reads
0 Comments
#38
【站內】羽希《淡星》
5 Likes
858 Reads
0 Comments
#39
【言論】該低調的事意思就是不要搞高調
2 Likes
679 Reads
2 Comments
#40
【言論】相對穩定獲利的意思就是,確定有營利呀不然叫人幹不確定獲利的生意何不食肉糜?
6 Likes
663 Reads
5 Comments
#41
【生命】4點42分,最後一口氣
3 Likes
584 Reads
6 Comments
#42
【繪圖委託爭議】請香港、海外繪師注意
2 Likes
863 Reads
1 Comment
#43
【日常】拍賣的奇妙冒險
2 Likes
672 Reads
1 Comment
#44
【推坑】《Vivy》從動畫到編劇
2 Likes
283 Reads
3 Comments
#45
【繪圖委託爭議】請香港、海外繪師注意-續集
0 Likes
271 Reads
0 Comments
#46
【生命】十點零三、永遠的小公主
0 Likes
182 Reads
0 Comments

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