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Fantasy
Romance
The Mark of Hades
Writer Chloe Quinn
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Chapter 6
Chloe Quinn
Jan 10, 2018
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Emoddess - Did I tell you that you have a way with describing things? Well you do. The flow to it is nice and it's easy to imagine how Fay saw the things around her in a different setting - such as the things about fallen warriors or statues (even the insinuation that not all of them were carved) left somewhat a haunting mark on the things she'd seen. Also, what is the deal with that guy she'd seen in her dream that suddenly had red eyes? I guess I'll have to wait to find out. Oh, and the little snippets of a young woman briefly went past her saying something about Nebiru was a nice touch that connects some part of an unknown past which had a pull to Fay. Definitely wanna know what is going on in that sense. The more things revealed about Fay, the more mysterious she becomes!  Well what I'm trying to say is that I like how this chapter turned out :D

And oh goodness so I guess Ben is kinda beating himself up over the part he had in on Fay. Hmm...I wonder what's gonna happen next between them.

The fact that Abe could sense that Fay was troubled deeply after her mission with just a look says something about their bond and I'm so glad they have each other's backs. The hugging scene is the perfect curtain to close this chapter~
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