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美男魚王子 (初稿,舊版教學用)
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前言
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#2
序章、那年夏天
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Chapter 01、新.人魚傳說 1-1 (1)
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Chapter 01、新.人魚傳說 1-1 (2)
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Chapter 01、新.人魚傳說 1-2
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Chapter 01、新.人魚傳說 1-3
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Chapter 01、新.人魚傳說 1-4 (1)
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Chapter 01、新.人魚傳說 1-4 (2)
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Chapter 02 被綁架了! 2-1
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Chapter 02、被綁架了! 2-2 (1)
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Chapter 02、被綁架了! 2-2 (2)
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Chapter 02、被綁架了! 2-3
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Chapter 02、被綁架了! 2-4
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Chapter 03、美男魚王子 3-1 (1)
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Chapter 03、美男魚王子 3-1 (2)
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Chapter 03、美男魚王子 3-2
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Chapter 03、美男魚王子 3-3
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Chapter 03、美男魚王子 3-4 (1)
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Chapter 03、美男魚王子 3-4 (2)
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Chapter 04、魚先生,我們談談 4-1
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Chapter 04、魚先生,我們談談 4-2
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Chapter 04、魚先生,我們談談 4-3 (1)
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Chapter 04、魚先生,我們談談 4-3 (2)
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Chapter 04、魚先生,我們談談 4-4
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Chapter 05、被囚禁的朵拉 5-1
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Chapter 05、被囚禁的朵拉 5-2
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Chapter 05、被囚禁的朵拉 5-3
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Chapter 05、被囚禁的朵拉 5-4
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Chapter 06、戰前的狼嚎 6-1
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Chapter 06、戰前的狼嚎 6-2
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Chapter 06、戰前的狼嚎 6-3
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Chapter 07、藍海的粉色奇蹟 7-1
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Chapter 07、藍海的粉色奇蹟 7-2
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Chapter 07、藍海的粉色奇蹟 7-3
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Chapter 08、暴風前的寧靜 8-1
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Chapter 08、暴風前的寧靜 8-2
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Chapter 08、暴風前的寧靜 8-3
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Chapter 09、決意 9-1
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Chapter 09、決意 9-2
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Chapter 09、決意 9-3
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終章、魚生請多指教 (1)
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尾聲、魚生請多指教 (2)
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【2018年作品 / 2021年改寫】

有人會懷疑「修稿的必要性」以及「修稿怎麼修?」,於是我便以這部作品為例,初稿直接放上,大家看完初稿後,前往改稿過後的新版《美男魚王子》,更好了解為什麼所以寫作己巧書籍都告訴你「初稿是用來扔的!」。


舊版文案

夏日的海岸小鎮,發生一樁裝神祕綁架案。

一隻母魚人、一隻「珍寶」,外加兩條魷魚屁孩,浩浩蕩蕩地把一個平凡的大學我綁入深海。

案情並不單純,他們的目的並不是為了贖金,而是為了把我抓去人魚王國「狄菲亞」當王妃——

不!

怎麼睡個覺,本姑娘就收下聘禮、上了花轎了呢?

這一定只是一場美麗的噩夢!

不過老實說,

眼前的這條「大魚」長得挺耐看的,唯一缺點就是「太自戀」。

當我說,要告他性騷擾時,

他卻十分正經地告訴我:「你們人類的法律對我來說並不適用,因為整個北太平洋都是我的領海……妳也是。」

我被雷了一身、又紅了一臉,

他、他怎麼能夠一面誇獎自己,一面說著甜言蜜語?

難道我後半輩子要在這片深海中度過了嗎?

這條大魚,既任性又霸道,老愛對我性騷擾。

「魚生有妳,請多指教。」歷劫歸來後,他在我耳邊說。

那一刻,我知道我心軟了。

無論眼前是真、是假,是夢、是幻,再也無法將我們分開。

他是我的美男魚王子,而我是他的人類王妃。

握著這份甜蜜,在彩虹的見證下——

許著餘生的承諾。


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仟言

IG | @yinting_z

臉書|@qianyan1479

痞客邦 | 仟言萬語 f452453.pixnet.net/blog

邀約 | [email protected]

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#1
前言
10 Likes
808 Reads
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#2
序章、那年夏天
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1184 Reads
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#3
Chapter 01、新.人魚傳說 1-1 (1)
22 Likes
974 Reads
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#4
Chapter 01、新.人魚傳說 1-1 (2)
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Chapter 01、新.人魚傳說 1-2
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Chapter 01、新.人魚傳說 1-3
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Chapter 01、新.人魚傳說 1-4 (1)
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Chapter 01、新.人魚傳說 1-4 (2)
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#9
Chapter 02 被綁架了! 2-1
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Chapter 02、被綁架了! 2-2 (1)
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Chapter 02、被綁架了! 2-2 (2)
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Chapter 02、被綁架了! 2-3
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Chapter 02、被綁架了! 2-4
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#14
Chapter 03、美男魚王子 3-1 (1)
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Chapter 03、美男魚王子 3-1 (2)
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Chapter 03、美男魚王子 3-2
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Chapter 03、美男魚王子 3-3
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Chapter 03、美男魚王子 3-4 (1)
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Chapter 03、美男魚王子 3-4 (2)
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Chapter 04、魚先生,我們談談 4-1
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Chapter 04、魚先生,我們談談 4-2
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Chapter 04、魚先生,我們談談 4-3 (1)
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Chapter 04、魚先生,我們談談 4-3 (2)
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Chapter 04、魚先生,我們談談 4-4
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Chapter 05、被囚禁的朵拉 5-1
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Chapter 05、被囚禁的朵拉 5-2
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Chapter 05、被囚禁的朵拉 5-3
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Chapter 05、被囚禁的朵拉 5-4
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Chapter 06、戰前的狼嚎 6-1
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Chapter 06、戰前的狼嚎 6-2
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#31
Chapter 06、戰前的狼嚎 6-3
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Chapter 07、藍海的粉色奇蹟 7-1
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#33
Chapter 07、藍海的粉色奇蹟 7-2
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#34
Chapter 07、藍海的粉色奇蹟 7-3
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#35
Chapter 08、暴風前的寧靜 8-1
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#36
Chapter 08、暴風前的寧靜 8-2
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Chapter 08、暴風前的寧靜 8-3
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Chapter 09、決意 9-1
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Chapter 09、決意 9-2
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Chapter 09、決意 9-3
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#41
終章、魚生請多指教 (1)
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#42
尾聲、魚生請多指教 (2)
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