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How could people be so dumb?

There are many things I've seen over the years, and yet here I am, shaking my head at how dumb it all is.

They should have known! How can't they? It's common sense!

If only I can tell them how wrong they are.

Oh, wait. I can.

*you're

Total Reading Time: 4 minutes

1 comment

VaderZim7891 - Hahaha gave me a good chuckle :)
I noticed a couple readability issues early on; “...isn’t is?” should be “...is it?” most noticably.

Other than that, some formatting to help show what’s a first-person thought or narration, rather than quoted text from a screen.
2 months agoreply

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