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#4
Forbidden love
Swansea
Dec 18, 2018
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5 Mins Read
1,139 Words
Comments ( 12 )
dovidiob84 - Awesome.
5 months agoreply

Swansea - Thank you. 
5 months agoreply

dovidiob84 - It will just make it flow better i think. Let me know what you think of my little piece.
5 months agoreply

Swansea - Done the changes 
5 months agoreply

Swansea - Also thank you for your comment. I really appreciate your help. And also thanks in advance for your correction help😁
5 months agoreply

dovidiob84 - Hi.
No you don't need to add these headers it makes it more of a draft than an actual finished piece of writing. It's more like you are setting out an idea.
5 months agoreply

Swansea - @dovidiob84,@dovidiob84, are you sure that without headers my Story will be good to read? 
5 months agoreply

dovidiob84 - @Swanseait@Swanseait depends what you are trying to achieve.if you just want a short example of your writing for this competition then yes. If you wanted to flesh it out into a longer piece then there are things that would need to change. Have you read mine?
5 months agoreply

Swansea - @dovidiob84@dovidiob84 no I didn't yet. OK. I trust your words. I will remove the headers. 
5 months agoreply

Swansea - And can you help me correct the errors since I'm not that good in writing! 
5 months agoreply

Swansea - I thought ppl needed to know what happened on the night of wedding anniversary. So only mystery reveal. If you think its not needed... Then will the story be complete? 
5 months agoreply

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