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有一天,被捲入故事中
薑毛辣椒
Jul 16, 2019
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薑毛辣椒 - 然後…有種看著別人的故事在走的感覺…太深奧了…不過,他是看著故事在走沒錯啦!(我都不知道我在解釋什麼亂七八糟的東西了…看不懂就算了吧!直接公布名次吧!)
4 months agoreply

薑毛辣椒 - 不算送死吧?畢竟主角認為故事會照著原來的路走
4 months agoreply

薑毛辣椒 - 我想想能怎麼改
4 months agoreply

薑毛辣椒 - m…很深奧
4 months agoreply

麻黃 - 綜合整個故事算是簡要可愛,而且有扭轉童話的結局~
不過立Flag那句話不是那麼好,不是很自然,有「刻意送死」的嫌疑(?)
明明是第一人稱了,還是有種看著別人故事在走的感覺......
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