希望大家看一看拙作《夙願》,評論一下,例如:
1.哪段劇情印象最深刻
2.哪個角色(正反派皆可)印象最深刻
3.整體閱後感
4.可改進的地方
https://www.penana.com/story/59793/夙願
想多聽讀者意見,在原創方面更進步,哪怕只是一兩句短評我也很高興的!
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