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💕 細思極恐的兩句話 💕
Contest Holder 癇҉派҉  ⁹⁹⁹*
Contest Holder 介鶴吉*
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  • G: General Audiences
  • PG: Parental Guidance Suggested
  • PG-13: Parents Strongly Cautioned
  • R: Restricted
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💕 細思極恐的兩句話 💕
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By 5354
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Aug 6, 2020
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Comments ( 2 )
介鶴吉 - 我也跟阿墨有同樣的感覺,第二句直接爆梗,讓讀者馬上知道你要表達什麼,這真的很可惜
5 months agoreply

癇҉派҉ ⁹⁹⁹ - 故事內容不錯,但接結尾卻直接公布解答,建議可以用暗喻手法將故事帶出,留下讓讀者思考的空間,謝謝參加!
5 months agoreply

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