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Short Story
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Undead Leafs
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  • G: General Audiences
  • PG: Parental Guidance Suggested
  • PG-13: Parents Strongly Cautioned
  • R: Restricted
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Undead Leafs

Undead Leafs

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A young man has died unexpectedly and has encountered death. They talk about his death and thoughts on life, but throughout their conversation, the man feels something beating in his supposedly dead heart. 

What is life without a purpose unfulfilled.

So was this story too angsty and did it jump the shark at the end? I would love criticism, I would like for this to be good for the future and past works.

Total Reading Time: 9 minutes

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