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    I'm a traveler of stories and I want to improve my craft so I can do justice to anything I write. Would appreciate constructive criticism and maybe a friend or two.

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Undead Leafs
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A young man has died unexpectedly and has encountered death. They talk about his death and thoughts on life, but throughout their conversation, the man feels something beating in his supposedly dead heart. 

What is life without a purpose unfulfilled.

So was this story too angsty and did it jump the shark at the end? I would love criticism, I would like for this to be good for the future and past works.

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