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Hope’s Bright!
Co-Writer Cynderz*
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Hope’s Bright!
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#2
Prologue: Starting Point
Cynderz
Sep 20, 2016
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Comments ( 3 )
Dlofc84 - I like the back story, beginning with theology and seperation. Any world is based off of differences more often than similarities, our unique signatures.
2 months agoreply

Cynderz - So Ive decided to change the prologue. Though i like this chapter, i just felt it wasnt exciting enough to draw in readers. So this will now be chapter one and ill write a new prologue. Though its gonna be a cliff hanger :)
2 years agoreply

Frances - A great overview! Brief and to the point. I only suggest cleaning up some of your sentences to make them more succinct and creating paragraphs so it's easier to digest.
2 years agoreply

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