×

Please use Chrome or Firefox for better user experience!
Adventure
Completed
Hope’s Bright!
Co-Writer Cynderz*
Beta Reader Kitty
Beta Reader err0r4o4
2 spaces left
Collaborators
  • G: General Audiences
  • PG: Parental Guidance Suggested
  • PG-13: Parents Strongly Cautioned
  • R: Restricted
PG-13
RATED
14013 Reads
67 Likes
10 Bookmarks
Popularity

Facebook · Twitter

FAQ · Feedback · Privacy · Terms

Penana © 2019

Get it on Google Play

Download on the App Store

Hope’s Bright!
10 Bookmarks
2 3 4 5 6 7 9 10 11 12 13 14
#8
The Forbidden song
Cynderz
Apr 19, 2019
3
3
456
15 Mins Read
Comments ( 3 )
deathlessone@hotmail.com - I really like the book but the problem I have is you will be talking about Ray then in the same sentence you will call him by Brayden confuses me a little.
1 month agoreply

Cynderz - I have been going through each chapter attempting to fix the issue. I kept getting confused as well so I’m working on only using ‘Brayden’ or ‘Valero’ when a character is talking to or about him. Its taking longer than i expected as theres quite a few that i miss
1 month agoreply

Frances - I really enjoyed this chapter! it was really exciting!
2 years agoreply

Loading...
X