x
No Plagiarism!AurM2BAWgZy9BnRIsoBnposted on PENANA 這是幼稚的小學年代發生的事情,那年我讀小六。8964 copyright protection130PENANAtcaTEuH1XD 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANAmS1ZjZn8Go
8964 copyright protection130PENANAnDprsgYqYr 維尼
那段時間爸爸沒有辦法回家,便拜託冠叔照顧我。8964 copyright protection130PENANAcS1nYTCSUl 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANAwiLuKW8ldY
8964 copyright protection130PENANANBMkWgiRh3 維尼
悶熱的夏夜,漆黑的世界被隔離在陽台之外,透過落地的玻璃門能看到遠處樓房的燈,還有空置停車場的照明。8964 copyright protection130PENANAkxXk8bSfhf 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANAyQMBUKZuOT
8964 copyright protection130PENANAdKZoiBTmIy 維尼
晚飯過後只有我和冠叔在客廳,冠叔的身材十分壯碩,坐在椅子上,他的肩膀給我一種山的錯覺。8964 copyright protection130PENANAGE6HCiNQA0 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANA368POSpu5p
8964 copyright protection130PENANAOYBWsHstmf 維尼
他像個武士一樣一言不發,剛毅的臉神背負着一道橫眉。8964 copyright protection130PENANAptqVztOe1p 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANAA5UhkjgH5w
8964 copyright protection130PENANAPtB8NbPlJQ 維尼
「不如你睇住電視先?」我用遙控器打開電視。8964 copyright protection130PENANAzBOBZppTiz 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANAWY5RJk17CG
8964 copyright protection130PENANAgAc0MizxsQ 維尼
「你唔睇?」8964 copyright protection130PENANA19FKn2db7q 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANAUjMULaG1Xy
8964 copyright protection130PENANAk53gFSjBDU 維尼
「我去個廁所。」8964 copyright protection130PENANAJOOZdaLQAx 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANAYY3MYiU38J
8964 copyright protection130PENANAW8mHUnIMU8 維尼
「好。」8964 copyright protection130PENANAIUFdc6BoYU 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANAMqbeRON7Ln
8964 copyright protection130PENANA8IIuswaDNH 維尼
透過小便的藉口,我難得獲得喘息的時間,盡量拖延的我徐徐而進,最後還是回到冠叔的旁邊。8964 copyright protection130PENANAmxUHDzbrl0 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANAk2XSF7XHzW
8964 copyright protection130PENANAIpnl82vAOL 維尼
如果要和冠叔聊天應該很困難,幸好我有事情要做。8964 copyright protection130PENANAguCuZEF7PD 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANAD7sjMvWBeG
8964 copyright protection130PENANALfY4HXoCnF 維尼
小六學生都要做專題研習,當然我也不例外。我們決定用話劇的形式表演,劇本就在我眼前,毫無意外的話,這將是最終定稿。8964 copyright protection130PENANA4xw56udmJQ 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANA0CAXaukt6e
8964 copyright protection130PENANArRijd0LMqH 維尼
這個劇本卻讓我很頭痛。8964 copyright protection130PENANApjMZ2MmLQK 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANAFgF5VWNhGP
8964 copyright protection130PENANA0Vt6ejUP74 維尼
我們的專題報告主題是環保,劇本的名字叫《剩男》,他所用的一切東西都由他撿回來,某天他發現自己經常遺失東西,認為是被人偷了,於是展開了追捕兇手的過程……8964 copyright protection130PENANADM2jb9xnHG 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANAbj5yBdjJnA
8964 copyright protection130PENANAeM6srTb93A 維尼
如果劇本只到這裡,我大概會欣然接受。 8964 copyright protection130PENANAEQEdu9P1mo 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANAUiMs1mfGoc
8964 copyright protection130PENANAjZWZML4UPM 維尼
問題出在結尾,那位兇手是位忽然冒出來的角色,甚至有人建議兇手叫大嘥鬼。不僅如此,線索的設置也很牽強。8964 copyright protection130PENANAP60QYNCPdB 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANAUJiwgkPn0D
8964 copyright protection130PENANAMueYnQdE0d 維尼
如果有誰可以幫忙閱讀一下就好,他覺得可以接受的話,我就可以當作沒事發生。8964 copyright protection130PENANA2YhYtmcDl9 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANAuvAqlRH5yb
8964 copyright protection130PENANAQCBQh7yPNz 維尼
我望向冠叔,他的臉部線條強悍,紋路如溝壑一般深邃。8964 copyright protection130PENANAXOipEMSzhZ 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANAp4uGRP5NLG
8964 copyright protection130PENANAueNhBK5bgz 維尼
「冠叔,你想唔想睇吓我哋嘅劇本。」8964 copyright protection130PENANAB0yLHsxGrH 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANAygxgQJTZdS
8964 copyright protection130PENANAf1jNoPhP3u 維尼
冠叔捧着劇本讀了近10分鐘。8964 copyright protection130PENANAB34TyOl0ux 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANAovOgYnxRxE
8964 copyright protection130PENANAEtxNc9t5re 維尼
「我以前做過偵探。」冠叔直瞪着劇本。8964 copyright protection130PENANAkxQELAgW9i 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANA0kF6j0Bx4I
8964 copyright protection130PENANAUJdxVOXKWK 維尼
「嘩,有槍嗰啲?」8964 copyright protection130PENANAOkTLoMDOaC 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANAohKC8thEro
8964 copyright protection130PENANAZ6lhTu2W5s 維尼
「梗喺冇,私家嗰種。」8964 copyright protection130PENANAs0gI7LmZtA 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANA7J8f2ornqo
8964 copyright protection130PENANAKY2idTiiwq 維尼
「都好勁呀。」8964 copyright protection130PENANA5kpiIKj9lQ 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANAXJTP2MKNAz
8964 copyright protection130PENANAWsXRRDIEeW 維尼
「我覺得呢部劇,證據唔足以說服我。」8964 copyright protection130PENANAbiV1WRqhd5 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANAxWbXbHtSvg
8964 copyright protection130PENANAzphd9JiaJa 維尼
「其實…我都覺得喺。」8964 copyright protection130PENANAo379bsh09j 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANAFGTrTqEn54
8964 copyright protection130PENANAr6dRvL8uzG 維尼
冠叔把臉突過來,瞧着我的眼說到。8964 copyright protection130PENANAj4AypHyM3q 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANADlzYHiHTRk
8964 copyright protection130PENANAkAfHgv42YP 維尼
「咁你要同啲同學講。」8964 copyright protection130PENANAlrJbVZj5XC 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANAqRYQgfToas
8964 copyright protection130PENANA0IOFt9hPkW 維尼
「喺嘅……哈哈。」8964 copyright protection130PENANAlKdYdYnBOd 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANAHlCWFetGeD
8964 copyright protection130PENANAhnTzLyuVSb 維尼
我試圖用笑聲掩飾心中的尷尬,我被夾在同學的面子與劇本間,冠叔,則從縫隙中向我投來了直球。8964 copyright protection130PENANAmUdNXdi6FC 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANA0n1PorfzBm
8964 copyright protection130PENANAEMipoMQtaJ 維尼
「要點樣講俾佢哋聽呢?」8964 copyright protection130PENANAfjoS5mhi2L 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANAp7Zuh8J2Oi
8964 copyright protection130PENANAJtCL5cVXhW 維尼
「認真咁講,呢個劇本」他挪動手指。「唔掂。」8964 copyright protection130PENANA8oDMXB4SIw 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANAjreHq0nwBH
8964 copyright protection130PENANAe6adgbRShO 維尼
我想說的是「要怎麼問得體面一點。」,可我覺得再問幾遍冠叔的回答都會一樣,畢竟在他眼中這些都不是問題。8964 copyright protection130PENANAYqQ7grqlK9 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANA7rbeFr3m3n
8964 copyright protection130PENANAj7ZZ4XMBwK 維尼
如果搬出一些理論的話,他們會覺得我在賣弄吧?但是直接指出劇本有拙劣的破綻也不可行。8964 copyright protection130PENANAdEDYsLBZXT 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANAXcT1iJFyom
8964 copyright protection130PENANAxENurfQlHx 維尼
修改劇本與製作新道具顯然會帶來許多繁瑣作業,一定會被他們討厭的。8964 copyright protection130PENANAYlHw7gAxB7 維尼
134Please respect copyright.PENANA32YGFKvG50
8964 copyright protection130PENANAKMkVoZK8yi 維尼
直接表達出來的話,我真實的想法會讓大家開心嗎?也許我該學那些參議員,說些半真半假的話。8964 copyright protection130PENANAMhxKVi7PyQ 維尼
172.70.35.128
ns 172.70.35.128da2