Unfortunately I have to redo this contest because I  did not receive many comments  so this time I have to add in the stipulation that I need at least  ten people to enter the  contest. Again the rules are I need concrete feedback on on my works. The one who gives me the best feedback  that I can use will recieve a free copy of one of my books.

Read over my poems and leave comments the person with advice that I'm able to use will get a free copy of my next book.