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作者:阿掌111Please respect copyright.PENANAZqLsoreDZz
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作品:直言111Please respect copyright.PENANAvBzbodjjyd
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我想,看過直言的人一定被阿掌的細心和直接給震撼到!-_-"111Please respect copyright.PENANARDhpnxSQCf
可以數出什麼詞用了幾次,標點符號錯在哪裡......諸如此類都看得出掌神眼有多銳利;更不要說各種關於邏輯和故事結構的建議了。111Please respect copyright.PENANAyk3uRcKbpn
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