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我想,看過直言的人一定被阿掌的細心和直接給震撼到-_-"91Please respect copyright.PENANA0VfhsjPrJr
可以數出什麼詞用了幾次,標點符號錯在哪裡......諸如此類都看得出掌神眼有多銳利;更不要說各種關於邏輯和故事結構的建議了。91Please respect copyright.PENANAmrzqH4Gcv0
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