昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』150Please respect copyright.PENANAU5YxuHE8ut
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:150Please respect copyright.PENANAaoEBW28RRn
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐150Please respect copyright.PENANA4vInEFlHhG
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆150Please respect copyright.PENANAdZN0j9t8Lx
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲150Please respect copyright.PENANAj0RIAEc89A
帶出角色支線150Please respect copyright.PENANACcPC8Dwhfm
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破150Please respect copyright.PENANA6TZdkkqdV5
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫150Please respect copyright.PENANAB0t2zSPgG8
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴150Please respect copyright.PENANAI2sKI5dyuU
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌150Please respect copyright.PENANA2n9hArX9CS
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊150Please respect copyright.PENANAqHan8XfSNX
殺人犯vs富婆150Please respect copyright.PENANAyM0znRmSHh
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌150Please respect copyright.PENANA31LnxRNSh0
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴150Please respect copyright.PENANAsoPqFSrOyB
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕150Please respect copyright.PENANAHFGHAkSeFQ
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。150Please respect copyright.PENANA0xFIwlBDDi
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。150Please respect copyright.PENANAx3dFxqG1ux
魂之詩150Please respect copyright.PENANAvbtbpXXmyj
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