【我的第二首 rap 歌詞〈小丑〉】235Please respect copyright.PENANA6RV0GljrJg
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【〈夏之熱力學〉令人噁心的發想來源】
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這是我第一次寫 rap 歌詞 (09/22/2023 完成),因為我節奏還不會抓,所以先借用 MC HotDog〈貧民百萬歌星〉的節奏&旋律來寫自己的 rap 歌詞〈夏之熱力學〉。
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〈夏之熱力學〉
艷陽 真不像樣 人人曬得頭昏又腦脹235Please respect copyright.PENANAd5Mi6r6ZoQ
黑傘白傘粉紅傘大張 消極來抵抗235Please respect copyright.PENANAClIUofDNzh
我有樣學樣 撐開我的百元洋傘235Please respect copyright.PENANAT4GalqCgGj
啪啪啪啪啪啪天啊 傘骨竟然全斷
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這是哪來的神鬼力量235Please respect copyright.PENANAAAATtKtKK6
塑膠布蓋在頭上 彷彿有一種 sign ~ 哦235Please respect copyright.PENANAWcNWCwzQ2Y
我撥開塑膠往外看 目瞪口呆235Please respect copyright.PENANAH0AN668RsK
四周扭曲又冒煙 好像世界大戰
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熱力學 從第零到第三定律235Please respect copyright.PENANA57OLU8p8Xu
講的是熱這能量如何平衡和遞移235Please respect copyright.PENANA79APo99BKZ
說到平衡 我找不到好用的磅秤235Please respect copyright.PENANAQVDYS2tCTr
Give me a fine fridge 冷卻我夏天的熱能
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熱氣不間斷累積 持續傳遞到我這裡235Please respect copyright.PENANA2H7Ae31fjz
我又沒有保冷劑 時間一久就爆氣235Please respect copyright.PENANAktKMNKW7rP
自始至終都是某隻小強的錯235Please respect copyright.PENANAn1yVl6eaFf
不是我的問題 是夏日這個氣炸鍋 235Please respect copyright.PENANAQpyMyXjocN
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?235Please respect copyright.PENANA3HWy8Bg6Ez
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說235Please respect copyright.PENANAP6KNnB3I65
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它235Please respect copyright.PENANAHkm3mNvZGl
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
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you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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We're watching
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you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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刀光和劍影 這個夏季 差點就沒樂趣 235Please respect copyright.PENANASAhg1IAhCx
降低熱氣 非關修養 而是靠分析235Please respect copyright.PENANAyv3mwZaYnI
邏輯和紀錄裡 思緒才得以梳理235Please respect copyright.PENANAknQu2LXab1
沒有人知道怒氣變成動機包括我自己
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熱力是一種動量 燒起來挺耗能235Please respect copyright.PENANA5ci1f8R77l
平常我彬彬有禮 典型INTJ人235Please respect copyright.PENANAyUATyd1aOk
人不犯我我不犯人 人如果犯我235Please respect copyright.PENANAiyjxFbFYTY
用事實反擊截圖蒐證 這是種本能
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一隻網蟑 觸鬚是雷達拼命找人蹭235Please respect copyright.PENANAfm2EMBiySL
在網路上面爬來爬去 那氣味臭不可聞235Please respect copyright.PENANAuyG4wB7IWN
以為虧人很爽洋洋自得235Please respect copyright.PENANAEHbRYLmpSJ
卻不曉得天道好還 大家都有個小本本
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無形者例行一遊 在這熱爆的夏祭235Please respect copyright.PENANAq9PCMe7GAb
沒想到 參與一齣莫名的破戲235Please respect copyright.PENANAUg9QqKLwUZ
那隻網蟑什麼都不怕 以為最大是自己235Please respect copyright.PENANA7QNpwAGDo1
以污辱 以扭曲 把無形者扯進去235Please respect copyright.PENANAKPYHGDyFky
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?235Please respect copyright.PENANAMSbI3wXHfk
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說235Please respect copyright.PENANAJNNPbHDUqF
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它235Please respect copyright.PENANAOukOgEEtoF
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
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you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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We're watching
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you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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如果一張嘴能將正義伸張235Please respect copyright.PENANAk3fcPRTO4d
就算只剩下一張嘴那又何妨?235Please respect copyright.PENANAsq98sxp5Iv
遠勝用嘴造謠235Please respect copyright.PENANAaRCs9ITlou
扭曲污衊侮辱人鬼神的網蟑235Please respect copyright.PENANA1I8nBqayfm
待無形者彙整報告 全身爛光光
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知不知道色厲內荏究竟哪四個字235Please respect copyright.PENANA0tC3ZVKTyb
尾巴下垂心虛而吠敗犬就是如此235Please respect copyright.PENANAxDdbi0Ep4K
裝出老子不怕的樣子只為了掩飾235Please respect copyright.PENANA3MhLvWxrzs
殊不知已被看穿可悲的心思
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熱到不行的盛夏總算已經完畢235Please respect copyright.PENANA4KTq2H7k0R
將要開始的是到達臨界點的業力235Please respect copyright.PENANAd2YqtCb92u
作用力必定會帶來反作用力235Please respect copyright.PENANAgbfRQNicq9
網蟑舉止人鬼神再也看不下去
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人在做惡,天在冷看235Please respect copyright.PENANASBXdbeAl3Y
懲罰或者機會都將由祂們決定 人無法管235Please respect copyright.PENANAHaWsj2CRsB
網蟑現在所有一切都是它不斷拼命235Please respect copyright.PENANAPa8lyonPMl
用骯髒言語行徑 自己走向絕境
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?235Please respect copyright.PENANAk4kXs1LlyE
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說235Please respect copyright.PENANAzRHamyugHF
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它235Please respect copyright.PENANAZjN1Ntr1Tj
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
We're watching
We're watching
you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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We're watching
We're watching
We're watching
you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?235Please respect copyright.PENANAbqxx0FxmI4
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說235Please respect copyright.PENANAXwNhxaOXrI
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它235Please respect copyright.PENANA2QJwp4V1tn
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
We're watching
We're watching
you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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We're watching
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We're watching
you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude ! ( x 3)
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魔鏡歌詞網〈貧民百萬歌星〉歌詞連結:
https://mojim.com/twy101024x12x2.htm
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【創作感想】
寫了上百首新詩,也聽過不少 rap 的我,本以為 rap 不難寫,沒想到一開寫才發現:rap 歌詞的字數真是超・級・多!這麼多字要怎麼生?他人事件絕對不足以支撐,只有親身經歷的真實,才有辦法用細節和強烈情緒 (e.g., 噁心) 來描寫。
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不到一個晚上寫出這首 rap 歌詞,證明我的想法正確。
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rap 要配上節奏來唸,雖然我的音感還不錯 (以前是合唱團團員,也玩過MIDI),但節奏感不夠強,所以第一首 rap 就先借用現有歌曲的節奏&旋律,不過歌詞完全是原創。
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之後會慢慢發展自己的節奏能力,使用我的蘋果福利機的原生軟體 GarageBand 來做節奏+作曲,配上我的原創歌詞。
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韓森老師的《來韓老師這裡學饒舌》有提到,rap 歌詞可以先單獨存在,之後再放上節奏和旋律;所以等我寫熟一點,應該會直接寫歌詞,之後再自己創作節奏或者請人配。
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寫 rap 歌詞,也算是另類新詩,還滿有趣;因為 rap 歌詞的承載量大,也比較直白,所以用它來寫讀書心得或法律常識,未嘗不是某種變形的筆記或網誌。
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最緊要有意思!!
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【博客來書店:《來韓老師這裡學饒舌》】
https://www.books.com.tw/products/0010815806
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