A君:540Please respect copyright.PENANAIfMxM7Dmwv
謝謝你,不過我這篇沒名字欸—540Please respect copyright.PENANAnwN3OHEPPy
龍晨P:540Please respect copyright.PENANAqof8gJ4wT3
你指標題?540Please respect copyright.PENANA0JahxnI2HU
但有時訂標題也很困難~540Please respect copyright.PENANATOc6gjLzxV
就像你這一段對話(給我看的故事)到底想向讀者表達什麼,很難用十個字以來形容得完。
A君:540Please respect copyright.PENANAclooHLaeck
嗯對啊,540Please respect copyright.PENANAV4WC2tJIWl
所以才困擾嘛。
龍晨P:540Please respect copyright.PENANAmXNMRrVl5j
那是因為,你寫的時候沒有先定主旨,540Please respect copyright.PENANAkg4Qsj4Vmv
所以沒有中心思想在。540Please respect copyright.PENANAEVYH102DKv
我猜的對嗎?
A君:540Please respect copyright.PENANAo5BdeW0mfZ
嗯,我所有寫出來的都是臨時起意的。540Please respect copyright.PENANAKggAl8eeVb
所以...有時候看以前的文,都還會想著:這真是我寫過的嗎?540Please respect copyright.PENANA0gLUgAn1gW
對了,我所有的文都無題。
龍晨P:540Please respect copyright.PENANAKbxbaZaxbk
看來你真的很喜歡想這些小故事!540Please respect copyright.PENANAcML5AUwP2i
如果是長篇故事,很難沒有主題和中心思想。
A君:540Please respect copyright.PENANAMGZpSV7IPG
那是因為我很沒耐心,只能寫短的啊!
龍晨P:540Please respect copyright.PENANAxTS4xnP1lf
哈哈~真的嗎~XDD540Please respect copyright.PENANAp6jT9vytDo
我認為呢~ 只是因為這個故事你沒有材料寫不下去。540Please respect copyright.PENANAetv7puSGkT
所以下一次你會想到其他人發生其他的故事,540Please respect copyright.PENANAYsSF6MPj1d
而不是一直把這個故事接下去,寫成長篇。
A君:540Please respect copyright.PENANA8REKZppI15
當然是真的啊~所以我之前的小說寫到後面全都是我朋友寫的。540Please respect copyright.PENANAVVZW5Q6Vv9
說來有點不負責任,但我就是沒辦法好好寫完,因為往往都是在我還沒寫完一篇,另一篇的靈感就來了。540Please respect copyright.PENANADDYOiNleUq
我才剛打完你就講了我要說的😂😂 狂
龍晨P:540Please respect copyright.PENANAdDyIOFlR8s
我指的「材料」,其實就是你「靈感」的原料。540Please respect copyright.PENANAJoxwx9yvUj
沒有「靈感」,是因為你「材料」用完了。
A君:540Please respect copyright.PENANAZreC9y1E8Z
那材料沒了怎麼補充啊?
龍晨P:540Please respect copyright.PENANAdQdNqy9ReP
我先教你如何準備材料,好嗎?
A君:540Please respect copyright.PENANApZf7UWC4i2
好啊。
龍晨P:540Please respect copyright.PENANAPVSPWcFtHb
如果寫作課給你一個題目:「強者和弱者」,三百字。540Please respect copyright.PENANAbcqDWmSkpH
你會想到寫什麼故事?我們看看裡面有什麼材料在。540Please respect copyright.PENANA3axg7o6EJ8
大致形容一下你想到的畫面就好。540Please respect copyright.PENANAXTsWHen1zs
這個大致形容就是你的中心思想了。
A君:540Please respect copyright.PENANAS5uvFZSDUe
好的,540Please respect copyright.PENANAL83coZd1B6
強者和弱者=弱肉強食的世界、540Please respect copyright.PENANAJ6m9tSKTCf
有關言情的武俠小說吧。
龍晨P:540Please respect copyright.PENANAd04uTbfXcU
『弱肉強食』是第一類材料,540Please respect copyright.PENANASXzBHAn6dV
『武俠』和『言情』第二類材料。
A君:540Please respect copyright.PENANAfHRK3PRzAy
弱肉強食怎麼會是材料啊?
龍晨P:540Please respect copyright.PENANA1Na3b6hB9d
讓我配上一些東西說明吧。540Please respect copyright.PENANAY7wTTm0Hzu
『英雄』『總裁』『乞丐』『軍人』是第三類材料540Please respect copyright.PENANAW1O9QcBdrS
有了這些材料,可以組織出故事靈感。540Please respect copyright.PENANAhGkQEyZ9hV
比如:540Please respect copyright.PENANAEPUuPIn4sd
『乞丐』是強者,而『總裁』是弱者。540Please respect copyright.PENANAKeyMew3bkZ
兩者之間發生了一個『弱肉被強食』的故事。而這是一個『言情』做主題。540Please respect copyright.PENANACTYfzPz14X
總裁被乞丐吃了(攻受意味
A君:540Please respect copyright.PENANAFfaDuv01rf
還是不懂欸
龍晨P:540Please respect copyright.PENANA2JG9QVKFdl
嗯...我好像舉錯例了
A君:540Please respect copyright.PENANAZx0D5yVs1u
你的思維和他人不同啊…
龍晨P:540Please respect copyright.PENANAb1zk8e6UBC
『弱肉強食』描述兩個事物的互相關係540Please respect copyright.PENANA5veFczeFXa
一個強,一個弱,對吧?
A君:540Please respect copyright.PENANAqvlJabc2eH
嗯,對啊
龍晨P:540Please respect copyright.PENANAFnzPtSM5Es
有了這個定義之後,憑空創作出來的人物就有『身份和關聯』,540Please respect copyright.PENANAeMhfT7FYoz
他們在故事裡,一個強,一個弱,強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方。
A君:540Please respect copyright.PENANASGOCYVA0HE
強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方的話,那弱的一方是在反抗的一方嗎?
龍晨P:540Please respect copyright.PENANAyf3fpGXcat
這個要再看其他材料能給你什麼想像了:540Please respect copyright.PENANATu3fepSIcE
『老虎』和『兔子』做材料的話,弱者看起來不可能反抗。540Please respect copyright.PENANAiRX9qkEkOx
但如果在放『讓弱者打敗強者』的劇本裡,就會變出弱者反抗強者的情節來。
A君:540Please respect copyright.PENANAqXMnywLPFT
哦~
龍晨P:540Please respect copyright.PENANAO60DMV5n1G
然後我就從沒靈感,變成可能想像和寫出:540Please respect copyright.PENANAaqcmK6cvGj
『一隻兔子用陷阱打敗了老虎』(配上智謀)540Please respect copyright.PENANAF3Uclc9u6G
『一百隻兔子聯合打敗了老虎』(配上團結)540Please respect copyright.PENANAp9YoB621eF
的故事
A君:540Please respect copyright.PENANAR6JoIgyADc
好的、540Please respect copyright.PENANASPgzqOf5fV
可是這故事好誇張啊,一百隻欸!
龍晨P:540Please respect copyright.PENANAqP9XnoFhfr
哈哈~誇張是能讓你記得的套路XD
龍晨P:540Please respect copyright.PENANAQ8ESoaudVo
現在,我們回來看看你原來的故事有什麼材料?又少了什麼材料? 好嗎?
A君:540Please respect copyright.PENANArQqzq0pWO9
我的故事有少什麼嗎?
龍晨P:540Please respect copyright.PENANA2m3BtbckXp
不知道~ 但你有興趣聽聽我的分析嗎?
A君:540Please respect copyright.PENANAzij7rFMlDA
好,只要是能讓我變好的我都聽!
龍晨P:540Please respect copyright.PENANAi1LYby7SkD
你想不下去,是因為這個故事只有幾個材料:540Please respect copyright.PENANAaJlGaWHDZV
1.『爭執』540Please respect copyright.PENANAU2tqLaPOVA
2.『有錢人/富貴的人』540Please respect copyright.PENANAzP44FFPULr
3.『分手的情人(主角)』540Please respect copyright.PENANAlpji5LGBuz
4.『狠心的姐姐(主角)』540Please respect copyright.PENANAKIg5aqXLZU
5.『不孝女(主角)』
其中3-5都是文章中的"我"她與各人的關係
A君:540Please respect copyright.PENANAmVT92hT4ux
嗯,對,可是這又說明了什麼嗎?
龍晨P:540Please respect copyright.PENANAUaJYIMsK48
當主角"我"的『爭執』一完了,整個故事也就沒有其他料能用,所以發展不下去了。
A君:540Please respect copyright.PENANAijTQKeF5pI
那如果加入復仇呢540Please respect copyright.PENANAYvYEytw4cb
搶她大姐的未婚夫540Please respect copyright.PENANASlrEmf3VhA
怎麼樣?
龍晨P:540Please respect copyright.PENANAbV6WyFvCur
沒錯~要寫下去就要更多的材料。那下一章《復仇》就是你想要的標題了540Please respect copyright.PENANATp1IVIhzXn
這一章叫《爭執》、下一章叫《復仇》……540Please respect copyright.PENANAeVf9V1jZkf
故事主軸可能就是『夏家因怨』。
A君:540Please respect copyright.PENANAWnBOD2dCaW
好的,了解啦
A君:540Please respect copyright.PENANAqb2irsqkZK
嗯...那男主要誰?
龍晨P:540Please respect copyright.PENANAj7HDaQ6L9H
不一定要有吧~?540Please respect copyright.PENANAS7n5Xw1PfB
兩個女主角又如何?
A君:540Please respect copyright.PENANA8iwmMyr0W6
可是我只寫過言情小說啊…
龍晨P:540Please respect copyright.PENANA31iWpsZTls
比如540Please respect copyright.PENANA1Ymc6dVrOh
1."我(筑楓)"對夏家『復仇』540Please respect copyright.PENANAewL9ZSkCEB
2.雨星又對"我"『復仇』
龍晨P:540Please respect copyright.PENANA0ccQeynN3q
呵呵~沒關係~材料齊集靈感到了,你就知道該怎樣寫了!540Please respect copyright.PENANA8D5eVezqzI
(要創作男主角,也是一樣用『材料』。)XD540Please respect copyright.PENANAOmQJIZTdRX
龍晨P:540Please respect copyright.PENANAerx23B8tse
只要你學懂解析自己文章裡有什麼材料,要從無沒靈感變有靈感會容易得多。 540Please respect copyright.PENANAtJRF1PFfxn
A君:540Please respect copyright.PENANA6dkk0iIPcE
你好厲害啊!540Please respect copyright.PENANAyV4CRLCggo
(重新把故事編排)540Please respect copyright.PENANAUSoN4ngfSb
龍晨P:540Please respect copyright.PENANAPirCQ3gH2F
你真的做很好了~剩下的請再找其他人幫你啦~540Please respect copyright.PENANAJuTaZK1YQH