《專業RPG玩家誤闖異世界成為勇者》作者:生如夢協228Please respect copyright.PENANA5uXGG00EDI
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故事大綱及人物設定228Please respect copyright.PENANAr71rR8Vs2C
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Art手上中拿著的正是新小說的大網概念書,然後他大力嘆氣228Please respect copyright.PENANAdSB0xtmG16
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「Thomas,以作品的故事內容和人物性格都是質素十足的水準。」228Please respect copyright.PENANAHWVC7rdbyG
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「對吧!對吧!我就説這是非常吸引的故事喔!」228Please respect copyright.PENANA2sLph8OxBY
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「但是,正正是這樣才讓人擔心。」228Please respect copyright.PENANAodoVYKcN2s
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「吓,為何會擔心啊!不是說質素十足嗎?」228Please respect copyright.PENANA4hgj5c7xgg
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論故事走向和角色人物都是超水準的作品卻讓人擔心?228Please respect copyright.PENANAbgz6A8IEa4
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「異世界題材的確是目前輕小說的主流,不過挺老實説,你並不適合異世界類型作品。」228Please respect copyright.PENANAXE3s3V5alH
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「為什麼不適合啊!你不是説故事內容和人物性格都是質素十足嗎?」228Please respect copyright.PENANAfJtNQee7ep
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受不了這種剌激的我,大大力搖晃Art的手臂228Please respect copyright.PENANAJMJHLczLAo
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的確,已經擁有「故事內容和人物性格都是質素十足」的大綱,就應該可以準備好下筆的功夫,但Art竟然告訴我並不適合異世界類型的輕小說?!228Please respect copyright.PENANAQzztoez0rK
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「簡單來說,說異世界題材對你風格太過不利了!記得你前兩部作品都敗在什麼嗎?」228Please respect copyright.PENANAHsGpArrNg5
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「敗在,敗在文筆?」228Please respect copyright.PENANAMhlcvTOjYO
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「無錯!就是敗在你的文筆喔!」228Please respect copyright.PENANAtH8cSr5Uuq
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「但是輕小說的原意不就作者輕鬆寫,讀者輕鬆讀嗎?理論上文筆不是作品最優先的考慮因素喔!」228Please respect copyright.PENANApUlFFxZ4FY
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「如果是日常類或是校園戀愛類確實可以先撇除文法水平,問題是異世界類型絕對不能將這種想法套入。你試試思考一下,做一套好的異世界作品需要什麼要素?」228Please respect copyright.PENANAYSTi3P2cxD
「好囉!怎樣也要賣關子!死要面子!」228Please respect copyright.PENANA9Yxae2XhB8
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異世界是怎樣的作品?Thomas如此思索。228Please respect copyright.PENANADvujtF2tRd
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優秀的人物角色,需要不同種類的生物,通常是獸人或是會説話的非人型物種,他們通常會有別於人類的才能和身體特色。228Please respect copyright.PENANAt45StUka2s
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可能是討伐統治世界為目標的魔王攻略戰,亦可能是男主化成龍傲天開後宫故事228Please respect copyright.PENANAHqDgQtwjh3
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但戰爭場面是必不可或缺的,難道就是描寫戰鬥場面方面需要文筆好?但戰鬥場面不是異世界的專利喔!應該不是這個原因~難道,難道是!228Please respect copyright.PENANAMrMyP1PgkT
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「難道是。。異世界獨有的世界觀設定?」228Please respect copyright.PENANA6isWL1wWM5
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「正是如此!」228Please respect copyright.PENANA34wuLeG95D
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「在上兩部作品裹,世界觀設定的確不能清楚描述喔!」228Please respect copyright.PENANADzed8MTZ9j
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「異世界就是需要由宏大的世界觀去吸引讀者互相討論,藉此增加人氣的一種題材,所以問題來了!文筆欠佳的你如何描寫令人討論的世界觀就是讓人擔憂的地方啊!Thomas」228Please respect copyright.PENANAzQYyVtQzNs
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「No!!我辛苦創造的故事和人物就此白費了!你還番啲心血畀我呀!」228Please respect copyright.PENANAmIOXh5IGyL
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「浪費這個故事實屬可惜,但用三流的文筆去寫這個故事就更為可惜!」228Please respect copyright.PENANAxDDKb6yQXp
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「你説話會不會太過直接啊!但這個事實卻無可否認。」228Please respect copyright.PENANARlu0MihFlw
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「文筆越好,出來的效果就越佳,這就是現實啊!Thomas」228Please respect copyright.PENANAcEo2DPBo2C
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「唉。。那我應該如何是好,我還要創造出世界最強的輕小說,不可以因為文筆欠佳就放棄!」228Please respect copyright.PENANAQ3lqXB0Brp
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「冇錯,就是要這種心態!我認為你開始要進入文筆修行了!」228Please respect copyright.PENANAVV5krTcsot
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「文筆修行?你開班教我啊?」228Please respect copyright.PENANAmSFkxmfyLG
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「當然不是,你忘記了我們學校有位實力級的作文高手嗎?」228Please respect copyright.PENANAT1q45dmVbJ
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「找她?但她是校花啊!隨便接近會引起公眾騷擾啊!」228Please respect copyright.PENANARxBv6hDlCI
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「白痴就是白痴!她是文藝學會的!加入學會不就輕鬆解決認識的問題了嗎?」228Please respect copyright.PENANA54IqCEIhqP
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雖然白痴我並不想承認,但他卻說得很有道理,我無法反駁。228Please respect copyright.PENANAk8ojC5YrMM
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「Ok,My Bad我放學就向老師申請加入文藝學會吧!」228Please respect copyright.PENANAEmzJhSydPU
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「等等,我想再看看你的故事大綱,一會兒才還給你吧。」228Please respect copyright.PENANALSEiNCNUG8
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「好~故事是否很棒呢~」228Please respect copyright.PENANA4TpOVCkUWP
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「等你把大綱寫成了故事再作評論吧!」228Please respect copyright.PENANAYcIWpWTPRj
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「••••••」228Please respect copyright.PENANAF7CFw1WbCk
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Art君輕輕的微笑228Please respect copyright.PENANAYuDNxTK6FO
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「真是的,你總是喜歡賣關子啊!」228Please respect copyright.PENANArIxjK2DwIu
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「人總要帶點耐人尋味啊~」228Please respect copyright.PENANAo8noUQzrFL
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---我是跳過上堂的時間軸---228Please respect copyright.PENANA3UZMJYmy4D
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「所以説,現在的大網概念書就在文藝學會會長手中?」228Please respect copyright.PENANAYlnomMFVWh
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「現是這樣!Thomas君真聰明!」228Please respect copyright.PENANArUrd8IrGPk
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是這樣的,Art君未經我同意就把大網概念書交到文藝學會的投稿箱裹228Please respect copyright.PENANABEoJWOhWEa
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「比起貿然向老師申請入會,倒不如毛遂自薦,令學會的人都知道你的實力, 這也是最容易讓校花注意的方法。」228Please respect copyright.PENANA2fUGrEpK94
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由好像挺有道理的,啊不對!228Please respect copyright.PENANAZzdOEsjJQW
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「那應該向我事先商量!大綱概念書是我!」228Please respect copyright.PENANAsuyggbxSuD
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「向你討論,你做事如此自卑,一定會事先否決。商量完等於冇商量過啊!Thomas君。」228Please respect copyright.PENANACfQoardgFg
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好,我認輸,一切依足你的計劃行事!228Please respect copyright.PENANAwi3v8Oc3IH
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所以現在,我一個人站在文藝學會的門口,宅男就是沒有自信別人對自己的評論啊!Art只是認識很久,而且興趣相同才能放心將作品交給他看。現在要面對的是一群陌生人,現在正可能嘲笑我的作品,感覺很可怕啊!!228Please respect copyright.PENANAFFhNGHgAnC
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在門口掙扎了十多分鐘後,228Please respect copyright.PENANAaY2rNXB71F
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「死就死吧!一切都是為了實現目標的那刻!就算以後要面對多艱難的事!我都要勇敢去面對!文藝學會的各位!我來了!」228Please respect copyright.PENANAwuBuYLARCC
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鼓起勇氣打開門口,然後閉起雙眼90度鞠躬,咬緊牙關大聲叫228Please respect copyright.PENANAjAllK7MInX
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「大家好!我叫Thomas!請各位以後多多指教!」228Please respect copyright.PENANAyZS0M0OWwP
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一個宅男為了夢想為了目標,到底願意改變多少,我們就拭目以待吧!228Please respect copyright.PENANAEf3U1NTtFg
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