如若要講我心願183Please respect copyright.PENANAFMT5ihvpAP
這可讓我覺躊躇183Please respect copyright.PENANA4tCjDmtZ6Y
望著現在這夜雨183Please respect copyright.PENANAFJaa7dPf8d
我怕此役會輸183Please respect copyright.PENANAIkebgL2uc6
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難得於街角相遇183Please respect copyright.PENANAtUHbqe2qr2
教我怎不歡悅183Please respect copyright.PENANAVhSZul76FG
讓我說出那詞語183Please respect copyright.PENANAmRt5iwF6fs
再見往昔暗戀183Please respect copyright.PENANA1g7Ru0WThC
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#從首刻的相見183Please respect copyright.PENANA3jIoDsILGT
到此刻的目前183Please respect copyright.PENANA36bMAictgA
何事我倆起初有曖昧之意183Please respect copyright.PENANAf62sQoEqrn
愛上妳可不止一時183Please respect copyright.PENANALIytHICJ6t
但我一次次遲疑183Please respect copyright.PENANAaiZ395U8r6
終於能說出愛妳這簡單字節#
這天似失去理智183Please respect copyright.PENANAZKCV37V1Or
放開所有猶疑183Please respect copyright.PENANAwlbkZlPWdB
想要聽妳跟我說183Please respect copyright.PENANADG0FUnRCb8
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挽手相戀相依
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容我對妳更瞭解183Please respect copyright.PENANAGfaCQnMLVN
日後每天給妳愛183Please respect copyright.PENANAYyjRbY1Id9
晝夜也覺妳存在183Please respect copyright.PENANARompai8Rll
內心難言的感慨183Please respect copyright.PENANAEdQBi3P8aq
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In the past I thought I was drifter183Please respect copyright.PENANAFy9HDnguKN
Was searching for the one183Please respect copyright.PENANAZLyWDtCiLY
Till now you say "Yes" to me183Please respect copyright.PENANAJMz9smhZnr
You're always gonna be my love
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妳將我迷惘在剎那之中消破
I wanna hold you till the fear in me subsidies
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《Sometimes when we touch》是我個人十分喜歡的一首英文情歌。填中文歌詞前,我搜索了一下這歌的背景,才發現這歌是描寫一段單相思戀情,「Dan Hill(原唱)寫這首歌時瘋狂地愛上一個女人,但這種愛顯然沒得到回報。」因此我填詞時也嘗試代入Dan。
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不一樣的是,我選擇的是由開始「躊躇」、「怕此役會輸」來做出一個打定輸數的心態,但到了最後「妳說可與我渡過,縱使滄海桑田」卻得到意外的結果!大概是處於暗戀的少年心聲?183Please respect copyright.PENANA8in4320pdD
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原詞有一句是「Hold you endlessly」,其中「Endlessly」的「E」和「L」我會分別將其解讀為「Eternity」和「Lasting」,真正愛一個人,便會想跟他/她一直的一起,成為互相的寄託。真正的「愛」並不會因為時間而流逝,反而雙方會因愛相處愈久,愈暸解對方,縱使出現一些小風波,也會把「損毀處」維修。
「修修補補亂世中一起蒼老」
(一次過向Dan Hill宇多田光和Dear Jane致敬!)
ns 172.70.126.146da2